Nowadays，most people learn academic study in university, but others think we should encourage to learn vocational skills more, do you agree or disagree? 現在，多數人在大學學習，但是，有人認為我們應該學習更多的職業技能，是否同意?(2015年11月21日B卷考題)

【題目解析】本題為經典教育話題改寫：可以理解為職業教育對比綜合教育，或者專才教育對比通才教育。

【謀篇布局】(讓步反駁)

首段：背景介紹+爭議焦點+作家立場

二段：讓步原題觀點的合理性

三段：反駁原題觀點的不合理

尾段：再次亮明觀點+總結理由

【思路拓展】

【職業教育的利好】

1. 人們的精力和時間有限，廣泛涉獵，難免蜻蜓點水。相反，集中精力學習一門課技能，可使人成為一個領域的專家。人生的奮斗的過程就是追求稀缺的過程，你要成為那個不可替代者。

2. 職業培訓學校培養的學生， 擇業更有競爭力，因為他們可以適合特殊企業的需求。

【大學教育的利好】

1. 通才教育幫助人實現全面發展，培養多元的興趣和才華，可以使受教育者適應未來不同領域的工作，因此，可以減少單一職業選擇帶來的失業風險。

2. 職業教育通常傳授的是以擇業為導向的知識，和就業相關聯的技能，僅是一種生存技能的培養，相反，通才教育不僅是傳授知識，還涉及到人的道德教育、性格培養、心靈成長，因此，專才教育更能體現完美教育的真諦。

【范文賞析】

【首段】背景介紹 + 爭議焦點 + 作家立場

Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without education, many of us believe is the victim of adversity. However，people’s views differ greatly as to whether or not specialist is superior to generalist. To voice my opinion, focusing on academic study in university enjoys more benefits.

【二段】 學習職業技能的利好

Granted，those who advocate vocational training are, to some extent, never without their reasons. First，zeroing in on vocational skills can help learners secure well-paid jobs quickly, therefore, the family’s financial burden can be greatly reduced. From our life, we can find some examples to prove that job candidates from vocational training schools are very popular because what they have learnt are career-oriented and job-related. Also，Jack-of-all-trades is master of none. In comparison with studying a wide range of subjects，specializing in specific field can make one stand out in a crowd considering that one’s time and energy is limited

【三段】接受大學教育的利好：

What I want to rebut, however, is that we can never ignore the immense value of academic study at university. The most glaring merit is that those who receive university education have plenty of room for career development because they have access to manifold knowledge and techniques. In addition to tapping one’s unlimited potentials in various aspects and helping one realize overall development, experiencing university life can bring more wonderful memories of colorful campus life. Last, this can benefit a nation, all-round education can train more comprehensive talents for a country，which will inject new life into the further development of a nation.

【尾段】亮明立場

Overall，my stand is that compared with attending vocational training schools，receiving university education is more feasible and rational because it helps students realize comprehensive development and cultivate more personal talents. Likewise, our society need talents with a wealth of knowledge.

【全文點評】

本篇主題明確、行文順暢、邏輯清晰、文風樸素、偶以亮點詞匯點綴，可為考生賞析之佳作。這篇原創范文只是雅思寫作之一種，文無定法，建議童鞋打造屬于自己的個性范文。2016年雅思有可能開始機考，很多童鞋報考學校的寫作分數也有要求提高的趨勢，唯有加強練筆，考試才能才高自現。

【經典語料】

1. generalist n通才

2. specialist n專才

3. specialized education n專才教育

4. comprehensive education n通才教育

5. vocational training school n 職業培訓學校

6. higher education = high education n 高等教育

7. acquire a range of subjects v 學習廣泛的課程

8. travel in the ocean of the knowledge v 暢游知識的海洋

9. avoid the possible risk of unemployment 避免潛在的失業的風險

10. Knowledge is not a burden 藝多不要身

11. be well-prepared for the future career challenges v為未來事業的挑戰做好充分準備

12. a wide range of subjects will help one be well-prepared for to work in different fields in the future 學習廣泛的課程可以幫助一個人為未來不同領域的工作做好準備

13. secure a decent job with promising future v找到體面的有前途的工作

14. excel in one specific field v 精通于一個特殊的領域

15. realize his or her all-round development. v實現全面的發展

16. have to face more risks of unemployment triggered by a single career choice v面對單一職業選擇帶來的失業的風險

17. …… is more feasible and rational …… 更加可行和理性

18. enhance one’s competitiveness in the future job-seeking v 提高未來擇業的競爭力

19. Jack-of-all-trades is master of none. 樣樣精通，就是一無所精。

20. inject new life into the further development of a nation v給一個國家的發展注入新鮮活力

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