Some people say job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that having a permanent job is better than enjoying the job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.

解析：

本題問到底該選擇什么工作，到底是自己感興趣的工作重要，還是穩(wěn)定的工作重要?與其他很多話題一樣，這里的討論可以復(fù)雜，也可以簡單;可以深刻化，也可以生活化。比如，有人認(rèn)為，應(yīng)該選擇自己感興趣的工作，因為這樣才能實現(xiàn)人生的價值，從工作中尋找到成就感和滿足感;而選擇穩(wěn)定的工作則可以有助于社會的穩(wěn)定，有助于家庭的和睦。本次想為低分段同學(xué)提供一個范文，看6分段作文究竟可以把一個話題簡單化到什么程度。

老雅一貫的觀點是：對于6分段作文，思想是其次的，清晰是最重要的。如何做到清晰表達(dá)?最關(guān)鍵的是要想得簡單，想得直接，想得具體;杜絕深刻，杜絕兜圈，杜絕抽象。對于低分段同學(xué)來說，這種寫作策略明顯更容易實現(xiàn)自己的6分夢想。

6分范文

Everybody has to work. The question is: which is more important in work, the job security or the job satisfaction? Some people think the job security is more important than job satisfaction, but others believe the opposite. In my view, both job security and satisfaction are important.

點評：本段為開頭段，首先提出話題，其次重述話題，再次提出自己觀點。

We all need a secure job. If we have a stable job, we can make a lot of money. Then we can buy big houses and expensive cars, and can travel all around the world. This will make our life more wonderful. If we have a stable job, we will not have to worry about losing our job. So we do not have to spend time looking for jobs. This means we can have more time to stay together with our family.

點評：本段論述“job security"的重要性。提出兩個理由：1)如果有穩(wěn)定工作，我們可以掙到很多錢。如何論述這個分論點呢?老雅提出的”自然接續(xù)法“可以發(fā)揮作用。掙到錢后我們可以買房子和車，可以到世界旅游，這樣我們的生活就豐富多彩了。2) 如果有穩(wěn)定工作，我們就不必?fù)?dān)心失去工作。自然接續(xù)下去，不擔(dān)心失去工作，就不必要花時間去找工作，結(jié)果呢，我們就有時間陪伴家人了。這樣，用”自然接續(xù)法“，兩個理由都得到了一定的論述，層次非常清楚，一句句寫來，明白無誤。

However, it is also important to have an interesting job. If we have an interesting job, we can do our job well. Then we can get happiness from our job. If we are not interested in what we do, we can never succeed no matter how stable our job is. My uncle James is a good example. He is a middle school teacher, which is a very stable job. However, he is not really interested in teaching. As a result, he is not very successful even at his fifties.

點評：本段論述 "job satisfaction"的重要性。提出一點理由：如果有自己感興趣的工作，我們就能做好工作。自然接續(xù)下去，做好工作，我們就能從工作中得到幸福。反過來，如果對自己從事的工作不感興趣，我們就不能成功。接下來，舉例論證。我有一位叔叔在中學(xué)當(dāng)老師，工作是穩(wěn)定了，但他對教學(xué)不感興趣，結(jié)果到50多歲還是不成功。這里使用的還是非常簡單直接的論述方法。

In conclusion, I think it is the best that we have a secure and satisfying job, because this kind of job helps us to make our living and have time to stay together with our family, and at the same time succeed in our career. I wish everybody could get such a job. (271 words)

點評：結(jié)論段，首先重申自己的觀點，并將前文的觀點重新表述一下，最后提出自己的期待，結(jié)束全文。

總體評價：本文避免了講大道理，避免了抽象，做到了簡單而清晰，直接而曉暢。雖然思維稍顯幼稚，語言也有不少重復(fù)生硬的地方，但把自己的思想說清楚了，因此很容易得到6分。如果英文水平不高的學(xué)生，試圖很深刻地去寫這個題目，語言千瘡百孔，邏輯混亂不堪，即使用出了幾個大詞，其結(jié)果仍然是4分。低分段學(xué)生，一定要掌握正確的思維方法和寫作方法，不要誤信外面所謂寫作名師的機(jī)經(jīng)，什么用大詞，用復(fù)雜句，寫深刻一些，這些雖然不錯，但真的不適合你。低分段同學(xué)不可不慎!

學(xué)生習(xí)作

請自行比較學(xué)生的一篇習(xí)作，它看起來詞匯用得大，思想好像也深刻一些，但它的得分只有3.5。

Most of the young people on job satisfaction have become an integral part of looking for a job. Their main argument is based on this idea; the work is the ultimate goal is to help achieve a better life. But recent research shows, the boredom in the workplace, hostility, pressure and depression can be lead to physical and mental illness, destroy our happy life.

This attitude is another group of older people’s criticism; they think must attach great importance to the safety of work. First of all, they point out that this work is only a part of life, so disappointment will not stand in the way of life. In addition, a good life is depends on the table of food and pocket the cash. In this sense, work safety means to get rid of the concerns to the basic needs to really enjoy life.

Therefore, I think whether it is good or bad, it will adhere to a lifetime of work, if they are able to adjust their career path according to the social and economic conditions, it will be better, because it will make them easier to adapt to change. It is inevitable.

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