Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of its negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

分析：

針對孩子的廣告有負作用，應該禁止。你是否同意?本題可以采取雙邊討論模式，既討論兒童廣告的好處，也討論兒童廣告的壞處，然后得出自己的結論，如兒童廣告有好處，但需要廣告商負責人，不要誤導兒童。但也可以采用一邊倒模式，即先承認兒童廣告有好處，但是應該禁止，其原因包括：(1)這些廣告往往夸大其詞;(2)這些廣告往往針對兒童消費比如游戲、玩樂等，既影響孩子的學習，同時還會培養孩子過度消費;(3)這些廣告為了吸引孩子，往往描繪虛幻的世界，從而讓孩子忘記現實。相比較而言，老雅認為，本題采用一邊倒的模式更容易贏得考官的同情分。

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Advertisements aiming at children can be seen everywhere these days: TV, newspapers and magazines, Internet. Many people believe they should be banned because of their negative effects on children. While these advertisements do have some benefits - they are informative at least, I am quite convinced that they are more harmful than beneficial to children.

In the first place, in order to attract children, many advertisers tend to overemphasise the "fun side" of their products. More often than not they will promote such products as computer games, dolls, animal parks and so on. I admit these stuff may be important to children, yet too much of them would distract children from their study. Even when they are advertising learning-aid products, the advertisers often claim their products will make children's learning process full of fun. This is really bad because it gives children a false impression that they do not have to put serious efforts into their study. In addition, children advertising is not desirable because it often leads children to buying things that they do not really need. That is why many parents complain that their children do not buy anything but those expensive "famous brands" such as Adidas, Nike and the like.

At the same time, children advertising is partly responsible for children being kept away from the reality. Catering to the psychological needs of children, many advertisements describe the world in highly imaginative and unrealistic manners. For instance, when they want to promote their doll weapons, they will describe the world as a place full of bad guys. A child exposed to such advertising may develop a deep sense of hostility to the world. On the other hand, when they want to sell entertainment park tickets to children, they will describe the world as a place full of love and without any danger at all. A child who has been made to believe this kind of advertising will have a hard time when they come across troubles in real life.

To conclude, since most children advertisements are misleading, they are really harmful to children who are not old enough to tell the difference between imagination and reality. Indeed, these advertisements may provide useful information for children, but these information can be obtained from other more reliable sources. Therefore, I hold the strong opinion that children advertising be banned.

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