2017年6月17日雅思寫作考試真題范文 大學(xué)生數(shù)量
本場雅思寫作話題：Some people think a country benefits from a large proportion of young people university educated, but others think sending young people to universities only leads to graduate unemployment. discuss both views and give your own opinion.越來越多的人接受大學(xué)教育，有益還是有弊？
經(jīng)典傳送門：考官simon 9分大小寫作范文共70篇大賞
真題傳送門：2017全年雅思寫作真題范文大匯總（第一時間更新）
行文思路：
本篇文章是一篇教育類和社會類話題結(jié)合的考題，注意題目要求是discuss both views,因此決定了無論支持哪種觀點，雙方觀點都必須討論到。
范文中第一段直接提出了作者的觀點，很多學(xué)生上大學(xué)會讓國家獲益良多。緊接著第二段論述了為什么有些人覺得這樣會導(dǎo)致失業(yè)——供求不匹配，高校培養(yǎng)了太多具備專業(yè)知識的人才而社會需要的人才種類是多種多樣的，比如很多工作是對知識及技能要求不高的。
但是緊接著轉(zhuǎn)折駁倒了這一點，失業(yè)現(xiàn)象只是暫時的，社會對人才的需求結(jié)構(gòu)也是在不斷調(diào)整的，社會在發(fā)展，單純需要體力勞動的工作在日益減少，更多的工作需要知識和技能，而這正是在大學(xué)里重點培養(yǎng)的。
文中第三段則是從正面論述了為什么很多人上大學(xué)對國家有益——促進經(jīng)濟發(fā)展。學(xué)生在大學(xué)中不僅學(xué)習(xí)理論知識，更是在這個學(xué)習(xí)的過程中鍛煉了自己各方面的能力，如果有一支各方面綜合素質(zhì)都很強的勞動力隊伍，必然促進企業(yè)高效運營，進而促進國整體經(jīng)濟發(fā)展。
最后一段用一個讓步狀語從句既總結(jié)了全文論述的兩方面內(nèi)容，又表達了自己的觀點傾向，從長遠來看，這種發(fā)展是對國家有好處的。
范文
Some people hold the opinion that if a great many youth attend college, it will make contribution to the whole nation. However, others argue that this will only give rise to a low employment rate. In my opinion, a country is likely to benefit enormously from this trend.
Some people may worry that there are so many graduates with specialized knowledge that there are no enough positions for them. As we know, the demand of job market is diversified, ranging from non-skilled workers to experts. However, with the progress of society, an increasing number of jobs require more mental work rather than manual work. For example, in the past, numerous workers are needed in the assembly line but now, with the assist of machines, only a few workers who can handle the machines are enough. Consequently, unemployment will not be a problem in the future.
Instead of being a problem, the students completing a degree will boost the development of economy. The university provides a place where students can not only acquire academic knowledge but also enhance their comprehensive skills and qualities. Studying can be an arduous and complex process, from which students can learn skills like critical thinking skills, problem-solving skills and so on. As a result, if a considerable number of students go to college, it will provide the job market with a high-quality workforce and companies are likely to run more efficiently with better human resource.
In conclusion, while some graduates may face the dilemma of unemployment in the short term, this trend tends to contribute to economic prosperity in the long run.
(266 words)原創(chuàng)來自小站范硯秋老師
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