Task：When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2016/04/16)

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解析：

這是非常古老的一個作文題目。問題的核心是：在城里，到底該多規劃建設公園或者運動場，還是多建設購物中心?很顯然，兩者都有利有弊。公園或運動場方便大家休閑，運動，從而有利于身體健康，同時有利于城市的安靜和安全;購物中心則方便大家購物和閑逛，但會讓城市顯得非常擁擠。在老雅看來，因為現在很多家庭都有汽車，因此最好將購物中心建在城市之外，城里則應該建更多公園或運動場。解題關鍵是認識到，在城外建購物中心，不會影響到人們的正常生活，而如果城里有太多購物中心，會影響到生活的方方面面。

When a new town is planned, there is always a problem to solve: whether should they build more public parks or sports facilities or more shopping centers? Although more shopping malls may provide conveniences for those shoppers, I believe building more public facilities is a far better choice.

老師筆記：

開頭提出一個問題：城市規劃的時候到底該多建公共設施還是購物中心;并提出自己的觀點，該多建設公共設施。

More public facilities help people to live a more satisfying life. With a public park nearby, even the laziest person will go outdoors and breathe the fresh air there. People can take a walk in the park together with their family members, chatting and having a lot of fun. This is of course much beneficial to their health than staying at home, sitting in front of TV or a computer like a sofa potato. At the same time, when people are enjoying their time in the park or the sports field, the town or city will become a lot more peace and quiet.

老師筆記：

(1) 本段論述建設公共設施的好處是為人提供更滿意的生活。由以下兩個方面的好處：其一是能督促人出門活動和呼吸新鮮空氣，比起呆在家里對人們健康更有益。其二是人們有地方享受和消磨時間，使得生活更安靜和平。

(2) chatting and having a lot of fun表示伴隨，邊散步，邊聊天玩樂。

(3) be beneficial to 對…有益

However, if there are more shopping centres than parks in the town or city, it will become much more crowded, noisy and dirty. When the street is lined with all kinds of stores, there will benumerous vehicles coming and going, and when shoppers rush into these stores, they will make noiseintolerable to the city dwellers. As so many people crowd into a limited space like a shopping centre, the safety problem may also arise. Some people may argue that, despite all these problems, more shopping centres will benefit people by saving their shopping time. This argument does not hold much water, however. On the one hand, having to push your way through throngs of people when shopping does not really save your time; on the other hand, as more and more families have cars, it does not really cost more time if they drive to the shopping centres built in the wider space outside of the town or city.

老師筆記：

(1) 本段論述建設購物中心的壞處，包括使交通擁擠，噪音吵鬧和街道臟亂;而且由于擁擠購物中心并不真正節省時間，而且私家車使得去郊外也方便(言下之意是購物中心不應該建在城鎮中而應該建在郊區)。

(2) be lined with 排列著…

(3) numerous=plentiful，用來代替many等簡單表達

(4) intolerable=unendurable=hard to tolerate/endure 難以忍受的

(5) do not hold much water (觀點)站不住腳

To conclude, I prefer to have more public facilities to shopping centres in a new town. A town with more public facilities is more peaceful, quiet and safer while a town with more shopping centres is noisy, crowded and therefore less desirable. My suggestion is that shopping centres be built in the suburb of the town/city where more spaces are available.

老師筆記：

結尾重申觀點并總結論點。城鎮中需要公共設施，會更加和平、安靜和安全;而有購物中心則吵鬧而擁擠，因此購物中心應當建在空閑的郊區。

參考譯文：

當一座新的小城正在規劃時，總有一個問題需要解決：到底該多規劃建設公園或者運動場，還是多建設購物中心?盡管更多的購物中心可能會為購物者提供更多的便利，我相信建設更多公共設施是更好的選擇。

更多的公共設施能幫助人們過上更令人滿意的生活。周圍如果有公園，即使是最懶惰的人也會出門活動，呼吸新鮮空氣。人們可以在公園里和家庭成員一起散步，聊天，玩樂。比起呆在家里、像沙發土豆那樣坐在電視機或是電腦面前，這當然對他們的健康十分有益。同時，當人們在公園或運動場享受自己的時間，鄉鎮或城市將會變得更安靜和平。

然而，城鎮中若有過多的購物中心，將會變得十分擁擠、吵鬧、臟亂。當街道上排列著各種商店時，將有數量龐大的車輛來來往往。當購物者一擁而上擠進商店時，他們將會發出城市居民難以忍受的噪音。當過多的人擠進如購物中心那樣有限的空間時，安全問題也會出現。有些人可能會爭論雖然有這些問題，購物中心將會節省人們的購物時間，使他們從中獲益。然而這樣的觀點并不十分合理。一方面，購物時必須在人群中擠來擠去并不真正節省你的時間。另一方面，越來越多的人有了汽車，開車前往建在郊外更廣闊空間的購物中心并花不了他們多少時間。

總的來說，我更喜歡在新興的城鎮有更多的公共設施而不是購物中心。有更多的公共設施的新城鎮將會更加和平、安靜和安全，而有更多購物中心的鄉鎮則吵鬧而擁擠，因此并不那么可取。我的建議是購物中心應當建在郊區，那里有更多空閑的空間。

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