文思泉涌之雅思寫作開頭段詳解
A good beginning is half done,在審好題列好提綱后,用最短的時間寫出讓考官一見鐘情的開頭段,對烤鴨們的思路和語言功底,都有比較高的要求。如何解決看到題目一片茫然的問題,如何將你的開頭段寫的不落入俗套,這三種話題引入方式和其高分表達,帶你精辟地概括題目意思,讓你在開頭段贏得先機。
一、今昔對比引入:
無論是在開頭段引入話題還是在主體段論證,對比都是個非常好的方法,用我們的生活和曾經的生活進行對比(如果覺得曾經的生活覺得很模糊,請參考父輩/祖輩/祖先的生活),突出題目需要大家論證的沖突點,如C9T1的范文:
題目:Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
范文:Traditionally,children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school but introducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists. This policy has been adopted by some educational authorities or individual schools, with both positive and negative outcomes.
通過traditionally介紹過去的情形,緊接著用but引出當代人們的看法,通過今昔對比來引出沖突點,水到渠成。這種方法尤其適合科技類、政治經濟類、教育類、環境類、文化類、社會生活類話題,比如:父輩們閑暇時只能看月亮數星星,但是科技進步讓我們擁有多種多樣的娛樂方式(科技類);幾十年前畢業后就很難在工作之余學習其他技能,但是在線教育的普及讓很多成年人也可以在家學習(教育類)。
以下表達可以作為參考:
介紹過去的情形:
Traditionally
in the past XX decades
in the last century
one hundred years ago(when……)
引出沖突點:
But
However/Whereas
On the other hand(注意這個短語是表示轉折,并不是并列)
Instead/Unlike
Nevertheless/nonetheless
On the contrary/in contrast
二、 下定義引入:
分析題目,確定話題(比如科技類,教育類,還是犯罪類),采用下定義的方式來引出題目中要討論的點,如C8T1的范文:
題目:some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
范文:A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.
分析題目,確定這是education類的題目,于是對a child's education進行定義:a child's education has never been about……,從而引出題目中要求論證的點how to be good members of society,準確扣題。
以下表達可以作為參考
XXX has never been about……instead……
XXX always involves…
XXX can never be avoided/left behind when we discuss…
XXX is nothing more than……
XXX is much more than simply……
XXX is generally considered to be……
三、時代背景引入:
通過時代背景引入,是最常見也最容易上手的方法,行文思路為:某種原因導致了題目中提到的當代很常見的現象,或者更加簡單粗暴點,現如今,題目中提到的現象非常常見/在被熱烈討論,如C6T2的范文:
題目:Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others it is unfair.
范文:As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.
需要注意的是,范文不是用的千篇一律的with the development of,而是as a result of。使用時代背景引入法的烤鴨們,切忌落入俗套。
以下表達可以作為參考:
The prosperity of XXX has given rise to
With the prosperity/enhancement/advent of
The last fifty years have witnessed……
Over the last half century,……
It is not uncommon that……
It has been noticed that……
It has been widely discussed/argued that
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