10月21日雅思A類寫作小作文范文
小作文
類型
表格
題目
The table shows information about the numbers of Australian people who visited the seven most popular destinations in 1999 and 2009.
范文解析
此表格圖形為9月9日的考試原題。橫排數(shù)目比較多，豎列項目比較少。在確定寫作思路之前，務(wù)必明確各項內(nèi)容在不同年份的排名以及是否有相同或者差異之處，以便對比總結(jié)、確定寫作重點。該表格切忌一味地描述各目的地國家游客數(shù)量在10年內(nèi)的變化（由于都是增長趨勢很難凸顯重點）。
高分表達(dá)（范文中已用紅色標(biāo)注）
The table illustrates how the number of …varied in a period from… to …
圖表顯示了某段時期…的數(shù)量變化情況
on the contrary
正相反
over a decade
十年間
prevalent destinations
主要的目的地
It is noticeable that…
顯而易見的是
reach the fifth-ranking position
達(dá)到第五位
soared with above 150% of growth rate
漲了1.5倍
范文
The table illustrates seven destinations that Australian people paid a visit to and how the number of those tourists varied in a ten-year period from 1999 to 2009.
In the year 1999, New Zealand was the most popular country, with the figure of 500,700 travellers, which was followed by United Kingdom ( 400,000) and United States (300,000). There were over 100,000 people visiting Indonesia, Fiji and Japan. On the contrary, the number of visitors to China was only 86,000.
Over a decade, although the top three prevalent destinations remained the same, the situation of other countries had changed dramatically. It is noticeable that China gained more popularity, reaching the fifth-ranking position while the least people travelled to Japan, at 250,000. Fiji merely attracted 7,000 more visitors compared with that in Japan.
Overall, it can be seen that more and more residents in Australia travelled abroad. Moreover, the number of tourists to three Asian nations and Fiji had soared with above 150% of growth rate, especially for China, almost tripled in the ten years.
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