2017年11月25日雅思寫作真題大作文7分范文
為大家帶來雅思寫作真題大作文7分高分范文。范文為社會話題，題目為：As major cities around the world are growing fast and many problems occur. What are the problems that young people live in cities are caused by continued growth? What solutions do you suggest?城市擴張給城市里的年輕人帶來了哪些問題，如何解決這些問題?范文來自唐老雅。下文范文自取：
解析：本周雅思作文問的是城市擴張給城市里的年輕人帶來了哪些問題，如何解決這些問題?
城市擴張，意味著越來越多的年輕人涌入城市，這會帶來什么樣的問題?其實，稍微想一下，我們就能發現各種可能的問題，比如就業壓力，住房壓力，交通擁堵，城市安全，子女教育等等。至于解決辦法，無非是政府擴大就業機會，重視年輕人再教育問題，甚至限制年輕人進入大城市等等。總體來說，本周題目的難度并不大，這類問題也是我們平時都經常討論和思考的，因此，本周作文比拼的可能還是在語言表達方面。
7分雅思寫作真題大作文范文：
Now it seems that all the big cities around the world are still endlessly expanding. The population of Shanghai, for example, was just 10 million in 1990s, yet today the figure has soared up to 30 million. The cosmopolitan expansion means that more people, young people in particular, are rushing into the big cities and this may cause a host of problems.
The first problem that faces the young people in big cities is that a good job will become increasingly difficult to come by since the competition in the job market will surely intensify as young people, most of whom are well educated, decide to pursue their dreams in the big cities. It is now not uncommon that a university position may attract more than 100 applicants. Secondly, as these young people settle down in the big cities, they will soon have their own family, which will impose great pressure on the city’s housing. In fact, this is exactly one of the major reasons why housing in the big cities today is so expensive. Then, when their children reach the school age, they will find it hard to get them into school, because the educational resources are very limited. Finally, a large number of young people living under great pressure in the big cities may bring about such social problems as unemployment and crimes.
To solve these problems, I would suggest that the government take measures to limit the number of people migrating into the big cities. In fact, cities like New York and Beijing have already set standards for those who want to come in. Meanwhile, it is highly advisable that the government offer practical programs so that the young people living in the big cities can receive further education to make them more competitive in the job market. The most essential thing that the government should do, of course, is develop a strong economy, which is the most effective cure for the diseases in the big cities.(332 words)
本范文可借鑒的表達
Soar up 飆升
A host of 許多 (=many)
Come by 獲得;得到
Not uncommon 不罕見
Impose...on... 強加......在......身上
Set standards 制定標準
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