帶來2017年12月2日雅思寫作真題大作文范文，題目是：Too much money is spent on looking after and repairing old buildings. Some people think money should be spent on building new modern buildings.To what extent do you agree or disagree with these views.本題討論因?yàn)榛ㄔ诒Ｗo(hù)老建筑物的錢太多，所以錢應(yīng)該花在新建現(xiàn)代建筑物上。其實(shí)本題的本質(zhì)是在變相考察不保護(hù)老建筑物的弊端和建筑現(xiàn)在建筑物的優(yōu)勢(shì)。

1.范文解析：題目類型是議論文的一種觀點(diǎn)類是To what extant do you agree or disagree類型，可以采用雙邊討論，也就是5段式作文。特別需要注意的是，題目中讓討論的不是:是否應(yīng)該保護(hù)古老歷史建筑物，而是some people think(觀點(diǎn)句)之后的是否應(yīng)該資助現(xiàn)代建筑物的建筑。注意不要偏題哦。

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2.原創(chuàng)范文

Buildings, whether they are old or modern, is more than just a place where human beings could escape from bad weather. Therefore, financial aid should never only be provided to the construction of modern buildings.

Just catering to the growth of urban sprawl is exactly what empowers the investment in modern buildings to be worthwhile. As an ever increasing number of people flood into cities for a better quality of life, both skyscrapers and high-rise buildings could accommodate the growing population, an effective and efficient solution to housing shortage in cities. With the infrastructure improving at the same time, this will also attract more investors and create and enhance way more job opportunities, thus energizing and bolstering the urban economy. In this case, financing the protection and preservation of old buildings is less preferable than that of modern ones.

However, such commitment to sponsor new buildings turns out to be in fact far more pricey. This is principally because when constructing a brand new building, building materials such as bricks, glass, steal , wood and so on are required and even worse more building wastes that are usually toxic are then have to be headed to the landfill. In addition to these material cost, the burden it imposes on resource scarcity and pollution could be prohibitively expensive, and in other words, never could these problems be resolved by money alone. By stark contrast, conserving traditional buildings consumes less and thereby proves to be both economical and environmental friendly.

Compared with conventional buildings, modern, high-tech buildings are also a financial failure in a sense. They do not enjoy as much special aesthetic value and historic significance as old ones do and what is worse is that they are so similar around the world that fewer visitors are willing to come and that fewer investors to establish new business. Old buildings, as a cultural heritage on the other hand, could attract millions of people and bring countless dollars and jobs for the locals. Therefore, maintaining them is not a money waster but rather a money-maker.

In conclusion, conducive as it is to urbanization, the creation of new buildings is not as inexpensive as the conservation of old ones and maybe the coexistence of both is by far the best, ideal result.(339 words)原創(chuàng)來自小站邢睿贏老師

3.文章結(jié)構(gòu)

P1：引入話題+表明觀點(diǎn)(不同意)

P2：承認(rèn)現(xiàn)代建筑物的優(yōu)勢(shì)：可以緩解房屋短缺和吸引投資來論證

P3：指出其弊端之后：現(xiàn)代建筑物會(huì)惡化資源短缺和環(huán)境污染來論證

P4：進(jìn)一步指出：新建筑物不能像老建筑物那樣促進(jìn)旅游業(yè)的發(fā)展來論證

P5:總結(jié)(總結(jié)分論點(diǎn)+重申觀點(diǎn))

4.高分話題表達(dá)(范文中已用紅色標(biāo)注) More than 不僅僅是

Escape from 拜托;免受...之苦

Urban sprawl 城市擴(kuò)張

Empower ...to do sth 使能夠(enable的同義詞)

Worthwhile 值得做的。。。

,an effective and efficient solution to sth 一個(gè)高效的的解決辦法

Flood into 大量涌入

With infrastructure improving 隨著基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施的完成(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu))

Energizing and bolstering 加強(qiáng)

urban economy 城市經(jīng)濟(jì)

Preferable 更合適的

Prohibitively expensive 價(jià)格高的離譜

Financial failure 財(cái)務(wù)上的失敗

Money-maker 賺錢的生意;搖錢樹

Conducive 有益的

5.高分結(jié)構(gòu)

Whether they are old or modern 不管是舊的還是新的

what empowers sth to be worthwhile 使得某事值得做

An effective and efficient solution to 概括性同位語

With infrastructure improving 獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)

This is principally because 這主要是因?yàn)?..

Never could these problems be resolved by money alone. 不能只依靠錢來解決。 倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)。

What is worse is that 更糟糕的是。。(主語從句)

Conducive as it is 盡管是有益的。。(狀語從句的倒裝)

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