2018年1月6日雅思考試大作文寫作7分范文
為大家帶來最新2018年1月8日雅思寫作大作文范文,本場寫作大作文為科技類話題,題目為:In many countries, more and more people can buy a wide range of household goods like television, microwave oven and rice cooker. Is it a positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.越來越多的人廣泛使用家用電器,如電視,微波爐還有電飯煲。這是積極還是消極的發展嗎?討論兩方觀點并給出自己的觀點。范文如下:
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Nowadays, more and more people are having consumer goods like refrigerators and washing machines. Does this development bring more advantages than disadvantages? (2013/12/12)
【老雅解析】
仔細研究題目之后,你可以選擇立場來回答問題。針對家庭電器,你立刻建立你的立場:利多弊少。
可以用如下結構:
引言開頭household appliances: more positive than negative
主體A段 the advantages of household appliances (支持主題)
主體B段 the disadvantages of household appliances (支持主題)
結論結尾household appliances: more positive than negative (重申主題)
這是2018年首次雅思考試。回答問題的方式很多,一般而考生贊成利大于弊。以下范文也是站在同樣的立場。
雅思考試寫作Task2 7分范文
In a world of consumerism, home electrical and electronic appliances have become so integral to modern life that, in many ways, they are what distinguish today’s society from yesterday’s. Household goods like television, microwave oven and rice cooker make your life so much easierand more enjoyable, but there are some disadvantages. As a whole, this kind of household goods, when properly used, can bring you more benefits than drawbacks.
老雅注:第一段引入話題,提出觀點,話分兩頭,但利大于弊。
Generally speaking, buying over a dozen household equipments intended for daily use may be beneficial to you at home, from cooking to entertainment. Your microwave oven, for instance, allows you to cook rapidly with the turn of a dial, and this convenience provides more options in your daily life than in the past. Likewise, your rice cooker can simplify the cooking process by reducing the number of steps between you and your meal at the table. Further, because your refrigerator preserves foods for days or even weeks past their natural expiration dates, you can keep enough foods stocked in your freezer for future cooking, thereby saving your time spent on shopping. Similar advantages also apply to washing machines, dish-washers, dryers, and vacuum cleaners and so on. Thus, the more free time you save due to having appliances, the more other things you are capable of doing at your will, including watching television in the comfort of home after a heavy day from work.
老雅注:第二段支持主題,一頭說利。第一句話是topic sentence。后面用舉例的方式說明各類家用電器能為你節約時間,而最后一句則是點題:節約出來的時間有什么用呢?你可以自由支配,包括看電視休息等。
However, the development of consumerism in many countries is not entirely positive; and there are drawbacks which are less obvious and yet they should not be overlooked. To begin with, it not only costs money to buy consumer equipments but also to operate them. Of course, cost is a disadvantage if you buy too many household gadgets and use them excessively in what is called the “throw-away” society. No doubt, the modern consumerism is likely to have an en environmental impact, either from the production processes or the disposal of the devices ranging from kitchen devices to television sets. Accordingly, without safe and efficient ways of recycling, electronic wastes (after being burned to salvage bits of metal) may release toxic substance into the atmosphere, polluting the immediate environment. That is to say, the dramatic increase in the number of household goods means the problem of greater carbon dioxide emissions, apart from the problem of rising energy demands and expenses that will need to be met.
老雅注:第三段說弊。第一句話是 topic sentence。先從花錢說起,然后討論對環境的影響。
On balance, the development of having useful appliances at your home is more positive than negative. Despite some bad effects typical of modern consumerism, life has become so much more full of pleasure due to these devices available from the kitchen to the bedroom. Now, ask yourself if you would rather live in today’s society or yesterday’s.
老雅注:第四段重申主題,利大于弊,二合為一。結論后應引言。
【有用技巧】
1. “Household goods” 是題目中的關鍵字(keywords), 必須出現在文章里,才不會跑題。當然,為了詞匯有適當的變換,可以采取同義的詞匯來替代。如:household/home “appliances, devices, equipments, gadgets, etc.”
2. “Is this a positive or negative development. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.” 答問題,看兩邊,如此你才能取得比較平衡的論證。你雖然認為好處多,你也得提到也有壞處。單邊論證,難以說服讀者。
3. 作文的三個T。Thesis statement主題句;Topic sentence 指標句;Transitional devices (however, thus, accordingly, likewise, but, and, nevertheless, that is to say, on balance, etc.)
4. 遵循評分標準:全面答題 task response ,邏輯連貫cohesion and coherence ,辭匯資源 lexical resource ,文法正確grammatical range and accuracy。
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