Death from overwork 過勞死
看圖作文在英語作文中是大家普遍缺乏練習的一種類型，一個提高的方式就是看范例和點評，針對其中的錯誤進行自我修正。
過勞死：
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From the picture we can see a young father died on the patient bed because of overwork and his wife is crying and mourning for him with extreme sadness,so does their child. What a shocking scene and how thought provoking the phenomenon that the picture insinuates. What the picture intends to convey is the significance of the awareness of health.With the development of society, people commence to livea life of a fast-paced life. They almost have no time to do some entertainments other than work. Moreover, because of the burden of life, some husbands need to work hard to sustain their families. Some husbands even have more than one job and they are overwhelmed by the strains. Last but not least, some people don't place an emphasis on their health and almost ignore it in daily life. What they leave to their family members is grief. From my standpoint, it is imperative that effective measures should be taken to eliminate the phenomenon. For governments, they are supposed to make some accordingly policies to relieve the workers' pressure. For workers,they must cultivate a good awareness of health and combine exertion and rest.
從圖中我們可以看到一個年輕的父親因為過度勞累死在病床上，他的妻子和他們的孩子在哭泣、哀悼。多么令人震驚的一幕，畫面暗示的現象發人深省。這幅圖畫想要傳達的健康意識的意義。隨著社會的發展，人們開始快節奏的生活。他們幾乎沒有時間做工作以外的其他一些娛樂活動。此外，由于生活的負擔，有些丈夫需要努力工作來維持自己的家庭。有些丈夫甚至有一個以上的工作，他們過于勞累。最后但并非最不重要的，有些人不重視自己的健康和在日常生活中幾乎忽略它。他們離開后，他們的家庭成員很悲傷。從我的觀點來看，有必要的采取有效措施來消除這種現象。對于政府而言，他們應該做出一些相應的緩解工作壓力的政策。工人們必須培養良好的健康意識和勞逸結合。
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