2015考研英語看圖作文范例點評：充電學習
編輯整合了一系列考研英語作文，并附有批注和全文的點評，希望大家能夠通過不同的話題，針對范例中的錯誤進行自我修正，從而提高寫作水平。
2015考研英語看圖作文范例點評：充電學習
寫作原文
There is no doubt that the two cartoons vividly demonstrate a positive and ubiquitous scenario in modern society: increasing number of people go to miscellanelous(拼寫錯誤，改為miscellaneous) training programs. A majority of people, with smile on faces, swarm into English classes and attend the lectures about WTO. What is conveyed(建議改為conveys) by the drawings is both inspiring and illuminating.What might account for this mushrooming phenomenon? Several points analyzed below may equip us with deeper comprehending of what we head for. First things first, the rapid development of economy has been accompanied with a corresponding of fierce competition. Therefore, many people prefer to attend some lectures about their careers, in the desire to(改為and want to,文中in the desire to表示“在欲望中建立”) keep abreast of the latest development of technology. In addition, the constant international communication stimulates people to endeavor themselves to learn something which is beyond their majors, thus subjecting the increasing challenges to their own minds(改為thus they may challenge themselves and broaden their knowledge). Last but not least, the desire for studying signifies the pursuit of individuality.From what has been mentioned above, we can safely conclude that if we are ever going to survive(加in) the harsh society, we must persist in learning new skills and knowledge. Only in this way can make us(改為we make ourselves to be) perfect candidates for a promising future.
總體點評
整體來說，文章寫得不錯;但還存在個別簡單的語法錯誤。作者在寫作完之后若可以花費幾分鐘時間來回讀文章，便會減少不必要的錯誤。考研作文的整體思路你已經基本掌握，后面要做的就是多積累高分佳句，為自己的文章增彩;再者，寫完之后一定要認真檢查，減少失分點。
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