2015考研英語大作文負面話題寫作范文
2015考研考試倒計時2天,在考研英語作文備考上,同學們可能在準備模板時,只準備了描寫正面話題的圖片,如果碰到寫心理健康的圖片,也有可能是負面性話題。別慌,冷靜看下文:
第二段
第一句:這幅圖展示了一種不好的社會現象(可用同位語從句具體說一下是什么問題)
第二句:造成這樣問題的原因有很多,但主要是某種品質的重要性尚未被認識到。(此話一出是不是把負面話題扭轉到了正面的論述方面呢?具體看下面例句。)
1.Laying too much stress on measurable capacity and qualifications, most people seem to turn a blind eye to anessential element—mental health—in our life.Actually, it is of critical value.
2. Why does thepainter express such theme? He, I guess, acutely founds most of us fail to beaware of an essential element—mental health—in our life.
3.The issue, to some extent, makes us reflectthe true value of mental health and enlightens us to wonder how to keep healthy psychologically.
第三句:這種品質對于個人的發展是很重要的。
第四句:這種品質對于社會的展是很重要的。
第五句:必須重視這一品質了。
第三段:
第一句:是需要真正注意到這一品質的重要性了
第二句:個人怎么做,社會怎么做,政府怎么做
第三句:提升人們對于這種品質重要性的認識。
最后一句:
4.If we allow mental problem to go unchallenged, the loss it may cause is unimaginable(難以想象的)and irretrievable(無法挽救的).
論證句
5.Maintaining good mental health is crucialto living a long and healthy life. Good mental health can enhance one’s life,while poor mental health can prevent someone from living an enriching life.
寫的是保持心理健康的重要性。
如果你準備了負面話題的模板,打算寫危害。那就看看下邊的句子吧:
6. Evidence from theWorld Health Organizationsuggests that nearly half of the world's population are affected by mental illness with an impact on their self-esteem(自尊), relationships and ability to function in everyday life. An individual's emotional health can also impact physical health and poor mental health can lead to problems such assubstance abuse.(藥物濫用)
寫了心理問題的危害。
7. It was concluded that people who lack mental health are inclined to anti-social behaviors. These behaviors are adirect reflection of their mental health.Self-destructive acts(自我毀滅行為) may take place to suppress emotions. Some of theseacts includedrugandalcoholabuse, physicalfights orvandalism.(故意破壞n.)
范文1(大學生的心理健康)
第二段+第三段
Unbalanced attention is paid to Chinese students' psychological health and academic achievements.(數字論據)National statistics show that there are approximately 30 million academically excellent students in China suffering from mental handicaps. Their problems include anxiety over schoolwork and exams as well as behavioral problems. To make the matter worse, some of them tend to behave dangerously.(舉例)One extreme example is about Ma Jiajue, a senior at Yunnan University, who killed four of his classmates just because of some conflicts caused by trivial matters.
Just as the trunk(樹干)is the main part of a tree, so mental health is anintegral(必須的)component of a person’s overall health.Therefore, it’s high time that parents, teachers and the society at large attached great importance to psychological guidance and assistance.
范文2(人們的心理健康)
It is true that physical factors affect one’shealth a great deal, but at the same time, we should not neglect our mentalhealth.In the past,people loathed (討厭)to be related with mental problems, yetscientificresearch has proven that anger, suspicion and anxiety do great harm to ourbody, while being optimistic can cure certain diseases. We have also heard thata great many optimistic people live much longer than doctors predicted afterthey have been diagnosed incurable diseases. Therefore, we should attachimportance to our mental health, and if we have psychological problems, we should face them and resolve them as soon as possible.
In my point of view, mental health is as important as physical health to us, and to make people healthier both physicallyand mentally, there is no other way than adopting a positive attitude toward life.
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