2018考研英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作技巧：句式替換
好的寫(xiě)作，首先是簡(jiǎn)潔，其次就要注意變化了，也就是標(biāo)題所說(shuō)的換種說(shuō)法。因?yàn)樵S多考生易將簡(jiǎn)潔與簡(jiǎn)短混為一談，其實(shí)二有很大區(qū)別。簡(jiǎn)潔的主旨是用盡量少的詞匯講述整個(gè)故事，簡(jiǎn)短的主旨則是為保持文章篇幅短小，精心撰寫(xiě)或隨意刪除文中的某些詞語(yǔ)或章節(jié)。
簡(jiǎn)潔并不意味著總寫(xiě)短句子。事實(shí)上，如果句式缺乏變化，文章就會(huì)顯得支離破碎，缺少聯(lián)系，讓人覺(jué)得寫(xiě)作技巧貧乏。句式的變化能令文章協(xié)調(diào)而流暢，會(huì)讓讀者感覺(jué)到作者對(duì)主題把握得游刃有余。雖然短句沒(méi)什么語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，但用得太多會(huì)使本應(yīng)合在一起的意思分離開(kāi)來(lái)。
TIP：不要使用一串串短的、支離破碎的句子。要理清自己的思路，盡量使句子長(zhǎng)度有所變化。
例一
【原】The Art of Strategy was written by Sun Tzu’s. It is a fifty-six-hundred-word Chineseclassical work. The writer put forth a set of principles in a very tightly compressed manner. They deal with how to defeat oppositions and win battles.
這種表達(dá)的問(wèn)題在于：
(1)簡(jiǎn)單的“主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)”結(jié)構(gòu)太多;
(2)"written"和"writer","TheArtofStrategy"和"It"，"setofprinciples"和"they"為重復(fù)用語(yǔ);
(3)讀起來(lái)很單調(diào)。
【改】In his fifty-six-hundred word classic, The Art of Strategy, Sun Tzu put forth a tightly compressed set of principles for achieving triumph over opposition.
介詞結(jié)構(gòu)+同位語(yǔ)+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)的形式比較好，因?yàn)閷?quot;SunTzu"放到了最重要成分-主語(yǔ)的位置，其他成分按邏輯排序居次要地位。整個(gè)句子很流暢。
例二
【原】Proverbs are short sayings. They are drawn from long experience.
【改】Proverbs are short sayings drawn from long experience.
例三
【原】People change and places change as well. Jennifer felt this strongly. She had been away for eleven years.
【改】On returning after an eleven-year absence, Jennifer had a strong feeling of how people and places change.
例四
【原】Beijing streets are crowded with taxis, company cars and private vehicles owned by the newly affluent. The number has been rising rapidly in the last few years. The latest statistics show there are now 1.2 million vehicles in Beijing alone.
【改】Taxis,companycarsandprivatevehiclesownedbythenewlyaffluenthavecrammed Beijingstreetsinrisingnumbersinthelastfewyears-1.2millionvehiclesatlastcount.
例五
【原】Moby Dick is a book. It is a long book.It is about a whale.A man named Ahab tries to kill it. Her man Melville wrote it.
【改】Her man Melville wrote a long book called Moby Dick. It is the story of a struggle of a man against a whale.
唯有多寫(xiě)多練，方能掌握更多的變化，同一個(gè)意思，n個(gè)表達(dá)方法，適當(dāng)結(jié)合，就能形成一篇好的作文，18考研加油!
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