托福獨立寫作范文點評——Why do people go to museums?
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Topic:Why do people go to museums?
Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
參考分析:
個人偏好,或者習慣,比如喜愛歷史。可以短時間內了解一個地方的歷史、文化。可以看到珍貴的藝術、文化、歷史、科學等收藏。著名的博物館周邊,由于游客眾多,一般也會有很多其他值得參觀的地方,也會有很好吃的餐館。另外,也有些人去博物館,沒有什么特別的理由。別人都去,于是他也去了。
范文:
人們到一個新的地方,為什么首先喜歡參觀當地的博物館?
(1)人們訪問博物館,是博物館反映了一個國家的文化和歷史;
(2)訪問時間比較短,訪問博物館可以最大程度了解一個地方;
(4)非常珍貴的東西,只有在博物館才能看到。
As a tour guide for a Japanese woman in the city of Beijing three years ago, I was amazed that she would be interested in the Chinese Culture and History Museum, which even Chinese pupils does not like to visit. Museum in my eyes used to be a really boring place, which could only display items that are dull(無趣的)and motionless(靜止的,不運動的). I thought Museums were dead. Until after I traveled to some places myself did Is tart to realize the life of museums.(作者通過自己的實際經驗來表達對博物館看法的改變,這是老外喜歡看到的事實說法)
A place consists mainly of its past and present in terms of time. When you are visiting one place, the existing scenery(現實的風景), streets and buildings give you chances to understand its present easily. But when it comes to the past of a place, things are different. With time going by, the past is always staying in the past. Sometimes with the new constructions, a place's past can even be burnt into ashes.(本段在講述博物館的意義,記錄一個地點的過去,避免一個地方的歷史由于新事物的覆蓋而化為灰燼)
In most cases, museums preserve part of the original appearance of a certain place and present plenty of information in terms of objects and pictures that one cannot obtain from the present. Only when information from the present and that from the past are combined could one obtain a relatively integrate(完整的)image of the place. That is why the Japanese woman insisted that she visit the Culture and History Museum in Beijing. Like most of other cities, Skyscrapers, glass walls and the modern street scenes are all over the place in this city. The red and gray walls, the palaces and small courtyards, which were typical scenes in the past, can only be found in the vintage(古老的)photographs in the museum.
Thus, visiting museums is a very effective way to understand a place's past, therefore one can get a whole picture of a place that one visits.(文章段落清晰,表達出了去博物館的重要性和意義,非常值得研習。)
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