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Topic：Luck and hard work

"When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

參考分析：nothing是一個絕對詞，所以，不能完全同意也不能完全不同意。選擇“很大程度上同意”。指出luck確實(shí)存在，指出可能導(dǎo)致人們成功的若干原因：誠實(shí)、睿智、幽默；執(zhí)著；肯于做不喜歡的事情。

范文：

不同意，實(shí)際上運(yùn)氣在人成功的過程中也很重要：

（1）先肯定努力是成功不可或缺的一部分。

（2）在找工作的過程中，同樣優(yōu)秀的人在申請工作的時候不一定就都會被接受，而兩個人的人生道路就非常不同，或者從申請簽證的角度來說也可以。

（3）別人幫助可以根本不費(fèi)努力而成功。

There is a humorous saying in English "The grass is always greener on the other side of the valley." The saying is used ironically（諷刺的）to point out that there is a temptation（引誘物）in us all to insist that others are more fortunate than we are. This is nowhere（一事無成）more true than on the question of luck and hard work. When faced with the "bad times", we often find comfort in the idea that we are special in our degree of misfortune. I feel that such an attitude is negative, and that it can bring only further misfortune.

Many famously successful people have begun from small origins. Mao was the son of a (modestly prosperous) peasant; the explorer Captain Cook was so poor that, as a child, he had to work by day and study by night; many of the affluent Americans of today are the children of the poor immigrants of yesterday. Beethoven（貝多芬）, it should be remembered, became deaf before the end of his career. There are many, many more people who have also made genuine, though Jess spectacular, successes against the odds.

Within his own terms, a person who is born into poverty（貧困的）in India is a great success if he manages to own a house in later life. Poverty cannot be reduced by merely complaining and blaming others: no matter how guilty other people are, each individual must reach out to success for himself. Indeed, some economists believe that the world operates by what they call "the rule of the jungle." They believe that in economics a person always attempts to gain profit from his neighbor: that given the chance the poor man would quickly make himself rich by trading to his own advantage.

Also, it is presumptuous（專橫的）to judge another according to his or her apparent fortune. No man can ever truly understand the sufferings of his neighbor. A man who appears comfortably rich may have suffered elsewhere in his life - through the death of a loved one, for example. Retired businessmen have often worked long hours in their youth. Surely, it must be wiser to respect achievement than to deny that anyone has achieved good in the world.

To rely on notions of luck - to believe that life is a kind of lottery（碰運(yùn)氣的事；彩票）- is an attempt to escape reality（是企圖脫離現(xiàn)實(shí)的表現(xiàn)）. Paradoxically,（自相矛盾地，相反地）the only time a person can claim that luck is more important than work is when he reflects on his own success. Because of that modesty, the great man then becomes even greater.（小編認(rèn)為文章作者用了很漂亮的例子，文章沒有正面論證他的觀點(diǎn)，而是通過許多偉人都知在逆境中努力獲得成功，由此來證明lucky has nothing to do with success，我認(rèn)為這樣的寫法非常體現(xiàn)作者的critical thinking和論證功底，用了很多高難詞，希望大家把這篇文章拿下去好好學(xué)習(xí)一下）

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