詳解托福獨立寫作的3個開頭模板
在托福的寫作過程中,良好的開頭段能讓評審官眼前一亮,為之后的評分打下良好的基礎。但是,怎樣才能是良好的開頭呢?ETS官方發布的托福獨立寫作滿分標準第一條中就明確指出:“滿分文章必須有效地針對給定話題進行論述(effectively addresses the topic and task)”。也就是說,在西方人眼里,明確的觀點,樹立清晰的思想主題才是最為重要的。
因此常見的開頭方式有以下兩種:一是開門見山型,即開頭段只有1-2句話,清晰、簡練地針對給定話題表達觀點和態度;二是背景概述型,即開頭段中先用1-2句話的篇幅結合給定話題提出背景,對其成因、現象或日常觀察等進行描述,再亮明觀點。 下面就為大家帶幾個不同級別的托福寫作模板,大家不妨來嘗試套用一下吧。
A.(good)一般性的
With the development/introduction…, xxx, the xxx, are more and more +adj/ become adj increasingly. Xxx often face the dilemma of whether to vt …… with all aspects carefully considered, I believe that……/ I think to vt what would be a better choice.
B.(better)比較有邏輯的,有支持性的
In daily life /during our life, so many problems are worth considering carefully. As what has been come up with, when you face/when it comes to /there is a public debate today that/recently the problem has been brought into focus that… ……what is your choice and what is your opinion? Some hold the view that/some think………..while the others believe that………. However, with all aspects carefully considered, I believe that……………
零碎的句子:A is a common way of ….., but is it a wise one? Some people hold the different view……
C. (excellent) 如果發現可以用到反問排比就這樣套句,前提是你的例子足夠多,頭腦風暴用的又好又快。
Have you ever been to ……/have you ever + 過去分詞/received/faced/experienced……
If you had never had these experiences, you would never know/ feel/ learn/ realize/ understand……+how much fun/interesting/significant……xxx could bring you.
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