【寫作提升】巧用6種修辭方法 助你的托福寫作更生動
對于很多剛開始練習托福寫作的同學來說，托福寫作的整理內容往往過于整體語言簡單，或者偏口語化，讀來別扭。還有的考生完全跑題，說的云里霧里的左右“忽悠”，下面小編帶大家看看怎樣巧用修辭讓你的托福寫作升級。
1. 排比對稱結構
Despite all the evidence, experts continue to debate weather global warming exists, how extensive the problem is, what the likely effects will be and whether any remedy is possible.
Despite all the evidence, experts continue to debate the existence of global warming, the extent of the problem, its likely effects and any possible remedy.
2. 比喻
(1)明喻：比喻詞出現：as, like, as if…
In many ways, no doubt, our world grows more and more complex, sputniks cannot be simple; yet how many of our complexities remain futile, how many of our artificialities false. Simplicity too can be subtle-as the straight lines of a Greek temple, like the Parthenon at Athens, are delicately curved in order to look straighter still.
(2)暗喻：比喻詞不出現。
America has given the Negro people a bad check, which has come back marked insufficient funds.
3. 對照：加深印象
Extremism in defense of liberty is no vice; moderation is the pursuit of justice is no virtue.
4. 類比
The Negro has a callus growing on his soul and it is getting harder and harder to hurt him here. That is a simple law of nature. Like a callus on the foot in a shoe that is too tight. The foot is nature’s and that shoe was put on by man. The tight shoe will pinch your foot and make you holler and scream. But sooner or later, if you do not take the shoe off, a callus will form on the foot and begin to wear out the shoe.
It is the same with the Negro in America. That shoe-the white man’s system—has pinched and rubbed and squeezed his soul until it has almost destroyed him. But it did not. And how a callus has formed on his soul, and unless that system is adjusted to fit him, too, that callus is going to wear our that system.
5. 擬人
Dawn was beginning to prowl about the sky and put out the starts.
6. 夸張
For she was beautiful—her beauty made the bright world dim, and everything beside seemed like the fleeting image of a shade.
以上就是托福寫作中怎樣巧用修辭升級作文，大家要在備考中不斷地練習。只看不寫，看到的東西就不能是你的，寫出來改善下記住了，這才是你的東西，才是你的思想。作文應該是個人化的。因此，從一開始就在語言上打造屬于自己的烙印才是上策。
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