【托福寫(xiě)作】如何構(gòu)建嚴(yán)密的邏輯框架？2大錯(cuò)誤案例分析
在托福寫(xiě)作中，我們是通常比較在意一些用詞和語(yǔ)句的問(wèn)題，但是作為托福考試來(lái)說(shuō)，對(duì)于考生的邏輯思維也有一定的考查。那么，怎樣在自己的文章內(nèi)體現(xiàn)出邏輯思維的準(zhǔn)確性呢?下面我們就用一下例子為大家詳細(xì)分析一下吧。
1. 分論點(diǎn)(supporting ideas)沒(méi)有緊扣中心論點(diǎn)(thesis statement)
Eg: As modern life becomes more complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
學(xué)生習(xí)作：Body 1:
It is undeniable that modern life becomes more complex because it is rivalrous: everyone is competing with each other in this society. With the improved modern life's quality, nowadays people often would have higher level of dreams and all of them want to achieve success. In order to achieve the dreams, people should do better than others. It's usually hard for people to stand out and obtain success, so people would ultimately find ways and to defeat others.
文中寫(xiě)到：隨著生活更復(fù)雜，競(jìng)爭(zhēng)更激烈，人們有更高的目標(biāo)和理想并都想取得成功，到此為止都與題目的前半部分相吻合;但后面說(shuō)people should do better than others太籠統(tǒng)，完全沒(méi)有點(diǎn)出題目的young people should have the ability to plan and organize，屬于部分偏題作文。
2. 前言不搭后語(yǔ)(inconsistency)
Eg: It is more important for the government to spend money on improving Internet access than on public transportation.
學(xué)生習(xí)作：Body 1:
Main point sentence: First, it is important to consider that improving public transportation can increase the sense of happiness of people.
details: Take Beijing as an example, in the past I used to wait for a long to time between two subways, which meant I had to leave home very early to school and spend relatively long time waiting for the subway, but after the government put their budget on increasing the number of subways in Beijing, the time spent on my way to school was really shorten, and I felt much relaxed every day and could focus more on my classes.
主題句表明改善公共交通能提高人們的幸福感;但detail中并沒(méi)有提到人們幸福感的提升，只說(shuō)明了北京地鐵數(shù)量增加后，"我"感到更輕松也更能集中精力聽(tīng)課了，與increase the sense of happiness無(wú)關(guān)。
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