【寫作必備素材】托福寫作萬能理由——成就感(achievement)
在托福寫作的練習中,我們往往都會被各類題目的范文,看花了雙眼。各類不同的題材和內容,讓我們都很難去整理出一個細節分類。不過,細細看來就不難發現,無論內容再怎樣花樣繁多,都逃不出托福寫作題庫的范圍。為了將托福寫作的內容細分化,托福寫作話題分為教育類、社會類、生活方式類、工作類、成功類、科技類、媒體類以及交通類等十余個分類。
首先,這里要說明一下,為什么說是“萬能”理由,那是因為,咱們的托福獨立寫作的話題主要分成教育類、社會類、生活方式類、工作類、成功類、科技類、媒體類等十余種寫作話題。
而“成就感”就和其中的“成功類”、“工作類”以及“科技類”中的大部分話題相關。也就是說,大家以后在碰到類似的寫作話題時,咱們今天講到的內容就可以在必要的時候出現了。
下面介紹一下“成就感”這個理由的使用,以及由此拓展的關鍵詞和萬能段落。
萬能理由:成就感(achievement)
關鍵詞句:a sense of achievement virtuous cycle 良性循環
grand feat/exploit 輝煌的業績
attainment of goals elevate our self-esteem be conductive to self-actualization有助于自我實現
萬能段落:By doing (something), we can enjoy a sense of achievement. The feat of accomplishing is conductive to self-actualization, which will inevitably elevate our self-esteem. Inflated esteem will proportionally contribute to even more solid achievement. This is virtuous cycle toward a better career. For example, I have a relative who works in a big company. He was once awarded the opportunity to travel abroad that excited him for quite a long time. After that he worked even harder and gained the elevated esteem.
下面是一篇和 “成就感”相關的托福寫作真題:
2013年4月12日北美的一道托福寫作題目:
工作類話題
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Workers would be much happier if they are doing different types of tasks during their workday than doing the same task.
參考范文:
With the sheer passage of time,the pace of work becomes faster and faster,so it is common that the boss order the workers to do several different types of jobs in one workday. Unfortunately, some employees complain that they have too much work to do.
But in my opinion,doing different types of tasks always means pleasance. The first point for my argument is that if workers are doing different types of tasks during their workday,they will reach achievement. That is, people will be proud of themselves if they are versatile. Thus if this working strategy can let employees think that "oh, I'm omnipotent."
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