【寫作資料】托福寫作語料庫之學生們是否應被鼓勵玩游戲
在托福獨立寫作考試的時候,想要在短短的考試時間內,找到文章最好的切入點,其實并不是那么容易的。所以,在備考過程中,我們的寫作練習,并不需要把所有的文章進行完整的練習,而是要就題庫中的文章都建立好明確的論點和論據。現在,我們就為大家帶來學生們是否應被鼓勵玩游戲的語料庫,希望能為大家能為大家的寫作備考帶來幫助。
【觀點類】
Some people believe that video games could inspire young students’ interest and make their study more efficient rather than distracting them and a waste of time, so young students should be allowed to play video games. Do you agree or disagree? 有人認為游戲可以激發學生的學習興趣,提高他們學習效率,而不是分散他們的精力和浪費他們的時間,是否認同? (2016年1月23日)
【頭腦風暴】
我們已從互聯網時代進入到無線互聯網時代。手機游戲成為年輕人放松娛樂的重要方式之一。游戲是一把雙刃刀,對于玩家而言,在放松消遣的同時,也耽誤了寶貴的時間,影響了學習和工作。但是,我們不能因噎廢食。
【作家立場】
盡管游戲可能給學生們帶來一些弊端,但是,只要可以合理安排和控制學生們的游戲時間,阻止他們玩游戲也是沒有必要的。
【思路拓展】
1 鼓勵孩子們玩游戲的利好
① 豐富多彩的游戲節目成為很多學生緩解壓力,釋放情緒的一種有效方式。設想,孩子們在校努力學習,課后讀補習班,作業繁重,鮮有大量的時間休閑娛樂,玩游戲可令學生們暫時忘記現實生活中的煩惱和壓力。
② 一些競技類的游戲其實是鍛煉玩家的反應能力和布局能力的,因此,學生玩家也會培養多方面能力,例如手眼并用,危機處理,團隊協作等。
③ 有些游戲的設計,以學習為導向,寓教于樂,讓玩家在娛樂中學習知識,這也可以提高他們的學習效率,激發他們的學習熱情。
2 鼓勵孩子們玩游戲的弊端
① 學生們的主要任務是學習知識,考慮到孩子們的自律性較差,允許孩子們玩優秀容易使他們分散精力,耽誤學習。
② 過度沉迷游戲有害健康,具體而言,玩家會視力下降,養成懶惰和久坐的生活習慣,不愿從事戶外運動,因而導致肥胖。然而,戶外運動是更好的方式放松身心,提高學習效率。
③ 少兒不宜的游戲內容是精神鴉片。暴力,色情,血腥的信息,對于成長中的年輕人而言,毒害其心靈,誤導人生觀,誘發暴力沖動,導致校園欺凌或少年犯罪的上升,可能會危害社會。
【范文賞析】
【首段】背景介紹 + 爭議焦點 + 作家立場
Computer games like many other prevailing entertaining activities are look down up by many parents as time-wasters. However, it is true that video games have been exerting a peculiar fascination on a great many people young players. Perhaps that is why people differ greatly in their stands as to whether students should be allowed to play video games. As I see it, it is no need to stop students from playing games so long as we properly arrange and control their game time.
【解析】
1. Video games have been exerting a peculiar fascination on a great many people young player. 一直以來,電子游戲都對年輕的玩家極有吸引力。
2. It is no need to stop students from playing games so long as we properly arrange and control their game time. 我認為,只要可以合理安排和控制學生們游戲時間,阻止他們玩游戲也是沒有必要的。
【二段】鼓勵孩子們玩游戲的弊端
To be sure, some problems invariably ensue if students excessively indulge in the computer games. First, violent video games are always blamed by the media as the reason why some teenage players become aggressive and even conduct some anti-social offenses. Also, the craziness about games is physically detrimental because players tend to reduce physical activities, thus, the sedentary lifestyle would increase the likelihood of obesity. Eventually, many parents are worried that the study will be delayed. The sole task of students is to update their knowledge. Youngsters will regret it for the rest of their lives if they fail to utilize their precious youth.
【解析】
1. some problems invariably ensue 一些問題隨之而來
2. conduct some anti-social offenses 做出反社會行為
3. The study will be delayed 會耽誤學習。
【三段】鼓勵孩子們玩游戲的利好
However,there is no reason to throw out the child along with the bath. Seen from the positive aspects, students can still become the beneficiaries of computer games provided that they can play in a proper way. Initially, some mental techniques trained by video games include: quick reaction, teamwork strategy, crisis-solving abilities, hand-eye coordination and so on. This kind of goal-driving experience will influence the players’ future life positively. Also, proper game time can, to some extent, help teenagers relieve their strain triggered by tight academic study. Imaginably, the study efficiency can be improved if one can vent his or her negative emotions. Last, some learning-oriented games can still facilitate students’ study, it is a good thing if players can acquire knowledge in a relaxing way.
【解析】
1. This kind of goal-driving experience will influence the players’ future life positively. 以目標為驅動的經歷會在未來對玩家產生積極的影響。
2. The study efficiency can be improved if one can vent his or her negative emotions. 如果一個人可以釋放其不良情緒,學習效率也會提高。
3. Some learning-oriented games can still facilitate students’ study 一些以學習為導向的游戲也會輔助學業。
【尾段】
In closing,whether the impacts that computer games exert on players are positive or negative largely depends on how students treat games. There are many benefits for people to play video games, as for students, they should control the time,excessive indulgence is unwise.
【解析】
Whether the impacts that computer games exert on players are positive or negative largely depends on how students treat games. 玩游戲的影響是積極還是消極,很大程度上取決于玩家對待它們的方式。
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