托福寫作轉(zhuǎn)折句型最新模板及改進(jìn)思路
托福寫作中，托福獨(dú)立作文內(nèi)容充實(shí)邏輯性好、語法準(zhǔn)確是拿到高分的重要因素。因此，在托?？荚嚨南迺r考試中過于關(guān)注語言，提分效果可能還不如前兩點(diǎn)。在備考托福的寫作中，磨煉自己的語言基本功顯得更有長遠(yuǎn)意義一些。本文將帶來托福寫作轉(zhuǎn)折句型最新模板及改進(jìn)思路的內(nèi)容，希望能夠幫助正在備考托福的同學(xué)們！
1. 托福寫作中，類似于“很多時候there be句型是沒有必要的”，考慮是否but可以直接去掉?
試比較
She used to be indifferent to the outside world, but an interloper changed her.
Her indifference to the outside world was changed by an interloper.
2. 托福寫作中，可否把but后面的句子改為短小的插入語等成分來體現(xiàn)轉(zhuǎn)折?
試比較
Driven by an interest in words, Claire kept trying poetry, novelsand literature analyses, but she hardly succeeded in any of these endeavors at the very beginning.
Driven by an interest in words, Claire kept trying poetry, novels and literature analyses—all with little initial success.
3. 托福寫作中，可否把but 后面部分改為更緊湊的從句?
試比較
It was meant to be a brief parting, but it turned into a long, lingering one.
What was meant to be a brief parting turned into a long, lingering one.
第二句讀起來更加集中、緊湊，并且去掉了"It was, but it…”等雞肋部分。
4. 托福寫作中，積累多一些可能的but替換， 比如：however/nonetheless/ nevertheless/ yet/ whereas/ while等，常常也能帶來新思路。
試比較
Once arriving home, she starts to review all the notes, not necessarily because the teacher requires her to do so,but because she encourages herself to study hard.
Once arriving home,she starts to review all the notes, as much from the requirement of the teacher,as from herself-encouragement.
托福寫作轉(zhuǎn)折句型最新模板及改進(jìn)思路總結(jié)
對于but這一最為常見的轉(zhuǎn)折，我們可以從“是否可以直接去掉?是否可以改為插入語等句子成分?是否可以改為更為緊湊的從句?是否有其他替換表達(dá)?”這個方面進(jìn)行思考。
但應(yīng)該指出，應(yīng)該建立在“自己有把握判斷原句與改進(jìn)后句子的風(fēng)格與質(zhì)量”的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行。有時候，不一定改的就比原句更好，短的不一定就更簡潔。
以上就是小編為同學(xué)們整理的托福寫作轉(zhuǎn)折句型最新模板及改進(jìn)思路的全部能讓，在備考托福時，同學(xué)們應(yīng)該去其糟粕才能高效地成就高分托福作文，最后小編祝同學(xué)們能考出理想的托福成績！
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