上海中考英語(yǔ)作文范文二
中考英語(yǔ)作文整理了上海中考英語(yǔ)作文范文二，供同學(xué)們參考。
范文2及點(diǎn)評(píng)：
I want to invent a time machine
If I have the ability to invent something that could make life better, the first thing that comes into my mind is a time machine. With its help, people could go back to the past conveniently.
We unavoidably make some mistakes that we regret so much, it’s fantastic if we could get another chance to fix it. Besides, it is of great importance to the aged people if they are able toenjoy their youth for a second time.
Although it sounds like an impossible dream to realize, I still believe with the rapid development of science and technology, my idea will become reality some day.
精彩亮點(diǎn)分析：
亮點(diǎn)一：the first thing that comes into mind 首先映入腦海的是。
亮點(diǎn)二：conveniently方便地，便利地。
亮點(diǎn)三：be of great importance名詞結(jié)構(gòu)更高端。
亮點(diǎn)四：使用be able to短語(yǔ)替換掉could，避免重復(fù)。
亮點(diǎn)五：with the rapid development of science and technology隨著科學(xué)和技術(shù)的迅速發(fā)展。
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