盼望的事:在軍訓的日子里-During the Days of Military.
【內容提示】
軍訓是同學們企盼已久的事，這一天終于到來了。你們在烈日下每天訓練6個小時，臉曬黑了，汗流浹背，但你們感到非?？鞓贰Ｓ柧殨r，排長對你們要求很嚴。過后對你們非常友好。經過訓練你們學到了許多東西。
【作文示范】
During the Days of Military Training
The day we were looking forward to came at last----a week＇s military training began.
During the training, each of us did his (her) part in earnest. We drilled more than six hours a day, though it was very hot at the time.
In the blazing① sun, we always tried to measure up to the high standards which were demanded . Sweat streamed down and we wouldn＇t wipe it off. Olny three days later our faces were tanned.② We felt happy and proud of it .
Our platoon③ officer was a young PLA man, about twenty years old. He was very strict with us during the training and very kind to us afterwards. By talking with him, we came to know not only more information about army life, but also about military affairs.
The military training gave us good discipline. It brought us great happiness, too. We＇ll never forget it.
（選自1987年11月10日《上海學生英文報》）
【詞語解釋】
①blazing [＇bleiziR] a．強烈的；閃耀的
②tan[t4$n] v．把……曬黑
③platoon[pl ＇tu:n] n．（軍隊的）排
【寫法指要】
文章開門見山地說，軍訓開始了，這是他們盼望已久的事。接下來總的講軍訓的時間和天氣條件。然后，作者從兩個方面展開：一是以苦為樂，二是干群關系。這些都是中國人民解放軍最優秀的傳統。最后，作者說他們通過軍訓學到許多東西，軍訓給予他們嚴明的紀律，也使他們感到幸福，永遠難忘。全文寫得條理清晰，情深意切。
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