Some people think that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人認(rèn)為政府應(yīng)該集中精力解決環(huán)境污染和住房問題，幫助人們預(yù)防疾病，你是否同意這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)?

【名師點(diǎn)評】

2015年10月10日雅思寫作慣性政府的智能話題(2015年考察政府發(fā)展旅游業(yè)的利弊，政府是否應(yīng)該支持藝術(shù)項(xiàng)目)，體現(xiàn)熱題恒熱的趨勢。政府職能話題最核心的提問角度是政府是否應(yīng)該為教育醫(yī)療買單，其次是才是否只有政府才能解決住房短缺、政府在環(huán)保中如何作為、政府發(fā)展旅游業(yè)的利弊、政府是否應(yīng)該舉辦國際體育比賽、政府是否進(jìn)行藝術(shù)項(xiàng)目投資等。

【讓步反駁話題布局圖】

首段：背景介紹 (個(gè)性開篇)+ 爭議焦點(diǎn)(句型引導(dǎo)) + 作家立場(清晰表達(dá))

二段：讓步觀點(diǎn)的合理性(最多兩點(diǎn)，可以例證)

三段：反駁觀點(diǎn)的不合理(我的口吻，三點(diǎn)反駁)

尾段：再次亮明觀點(diǎn) + (總結(jié)理由)

【范文賞析】

【首段】 背景介紹 + 爭議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場

The government, as a decision-maker, is the representative of citizen’s basic interests，hence, every governmental policy will inevitably exert a profound influence on the further prosperity of the nation. People’s views differ greatly as to whether the government ought to give priority to addressing environment-related issues pollution and housing shortage. personally, they are the unshakable obligation of a nation, however，there are still pressing social issues need governmental support and concerns.

【解析】

1. Every governmental policy will inevitably exert a profound influence on the further prosperity of the nation每一項(xiàng)政府的政策對于國家的繁榮都有深遠(yuǎn)的影響。

2. There are still pressing social issues need governmental support and concerns. 還有很多緊迫的民生問題需要政府的支持和關(guān)注。

【二段】 讓步段：政府為何應(yīng)該解決環(huán)保和關(guān)注住房

Indeed，the government should be accountable for the environmental contamination and housing scarcity. First，the government is the agency that should play the leading roles in safeguarding the environment, therefore, it is imperative for the government to adopt eco-friendly policies and provide its citizens with a cleaner environment. Further，the government has a key role to play stabilizing the housing prices and combating the illegal speculation of some greedy real estate developers. More precisely, some investors purchase many houses in order to gain personal interests, which increases the pressure of other house buyers. Thereby, the governments ought to readjust banking policies to restrict the purchase of speculative houses.

【解析】

1. The government should be accountable for the environmental contamination and housing scarcity 政府應(yīng)該對環(huán)境污染和住房短缺負(fù)責(zé)。

2. It is imperative for the government to adopt eco-friendly policies 政府采取環(huán)保的政策是勢在必行。

3. combat the illegal speculation of some greedy real estate developers 打擊貪婪的房產(chǎn)開發(fā)商的非法投機(jī)行為

【三段】 反駁段：還有哪些問題應(yīng)該優(yōu)先解決

Nonetheless，the government has more pressing social problems that need to render more concerns over. First，advanced education is the key factor in promoting the basic quality of a nation’s population，in this sense，free education could enable those who coming from humble background or remote rural areas to receive fine education, which injects new life into the further mightiness of a nation. Also，free medical care provided by the government should be deemed as a returned favor for those tax-payers. Every citizen could become the beneficiary of perfect medical treatment if a nation can lay a greater emphasis on optimizing medical care.

【解析】

1. Advanced education is the key factor in promoting the basic quality of a nation’s population 先進(jìn)的教育是提高國民基本素質(zhì)的關(guān)鍵因素。

2. Free education could enable those who coming from humble background or remote rural areas to receive fine education，which can inject new life into the further mightiness of a nation. 免費(fèi)教育可使來自貧困家庭或者偏遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)的人接受優(yōu)良教育，因此，這可以為國家的強(qiáng)大注入新鮮活力。

3. Every citizen could become the beneficiary of perfect medical treatment 每個(gè)公民可以成為完美醫(yī)療的受益者。

【尾段】 亮明觀點(diǎn) +　總結(jié)理由

Overall, my stand is that the government should assume the responsibility of improving the environment and reduce the pressure of housing shortage, yet, the relevant budget is expected to be rational. Meanwhile, proper support should also be allocated to education and medical care.

【解析】

1. The relevant budget is expected to be rational 相關(guān)的預(yù)算應(yīng)該是合理的

2. Proper support should also be allocated to education and medical care. 政府還應(yīng)該支持教育和醫(yī)療。

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