2017年6月24日雅思寫作考試小作文范文：柱狀圖
The chart below shows the percentage of female aged 16-25 in a particular country who participate in sports, compared with the percentage of people who watch them
經(jīng)典傳送門：考官simon 9分寫作大小范文共80篇大賞
真題傳送門：2017全年雅思寫作真題范文大匯總（第一時(shí)間更新）
解析：這是一篇靜態(tài)的表格，分析數(shù)據(jù)時(shí)注意不要把所有數(shù)據(jù)放到作文中去，挑選相差較大的值、最值、倍數(shù)來(lái)做對(duì)比。另外，常見(jiàn)的替換詞，比如occupy = cover=make up= account for, 是必須要掌握的。
The bar chart indicates how the proportion of female sport participants aged 16-25 is different from that of game viewers in some country. (用how ……is different from來(lái)將題目中的名詞詞組換成從句形式，用sport participants和game viewers將從句換成名詞---首段改寫除了同義詞替換，還可以有句型替換)
It is clear from the picture that tennis，golf and horse riding and racing see larger gap between the percentage of people who actually participate and that of audience.(第一句話表明思路，按數(shù)據(jù)差距大小來(lái)分析) To be more specific，there are much more tennis players than watchers(50% VS 30%). Conversely, more people prefer watching golf or horse riding and racing, with the percentage of audiences of both games three times as much as that of players.(注意必要的邏輯連接詞)
On the other hand， in athletics，basketball and badminton， there is no big difference between people who choose to watch these games and their counterparts who play. The percentage of people watching and playing former two sports is nearly the same(20% and 15% respectively)，much higher than the latter(badminton players occupying 11% and watchers merely covering 5%).(注意小作文當(dāng)中括號(hào)的靈活使用)
In general，tennis is the most popular sport while badminton is the least welcome one.
(183 words)原創(chuàng)來(lái)自小站黃天枝老師
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