2017年4月20日雅思考試寫作范文:搬遷
In the past, people used to live in the same place in their life. However, it is common that now people change their place where they live several times during their life. What are the reasons for this change? Is this a positive or negative development?
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本題問:與過去的人們固守一處不同的是現在的人們往往不斷搬遷,那么不斷搬遷住址的原因是什么,是好還是壞?這個題目屬于大眾話題,我們平時可能都經常在討論,所以對多數同學來說,可能比較有話可說。
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第一段,同義改寫,表達觀點
In the current era, people seem to be accustomed to moving to different places for living while they might stay in a city for their lives in the past. This essay will examine the reasons for it and I believe that it is a negative trend.
第二段,講一下工作變動和全球化的聯系
To begin with, increasing population mobility may arise from globalization to some degree. It is common that currently many employees in excellent enterprises will be sent to different countries in order to open new branches. Then, these employees, if they intend to be promoted, have to follow such instructions from their superiors. Thus, it is globalization and expansion of transnational enterprises that make their employees move to new places for living and working more frequently.
第三段,講一下追求生活質量為啥會導致搬家~
In addition, the pursuit of a better life may lead to that people change their homes. When people purchase a new house in a community, most of them have a specific purpose, such as a better air quality in the new community that can drive people who focus on environment to move. However, if the environment of the new community deteriorates after a few years, it is also understandable that people will seek and move to another community for living. In contrast, people in the past might not worry about these issues since environment was much better at that time.
第四段,講一下鄰里關系惡化及其后果
It is a negative trend for individuals to change their homes for many times since they may not have a sense of community. In the past when residents stayed in a city or a town for a long time, they were quite familiar with neighbors and it was also common for them to gather together to celebrate some festivals. However, currently, since people realize that they may move to another community in the future, they will not be eager to make friends with neighboring people. As a result, they may feel lonely since they do not belong to any community that they lived, live and will live in.
最后一段小小總結即可~
To sum up, pursing life quality and changing work places may account for why people move to new places for living. This trend may bring loneliness to people since they will lose a sense of community.
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