In some cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you thinks the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?在某些城市，規(guī)劃者將商業(yè)，學(xué)校，辦公和居家分隔在不同的區(qū)域里。優(yōu)點(diǎn)是否大于缺點(diǎn)。

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paragraph 1 :結(jié)合時(shí)代背景引入話題且表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。

paragraph 2: 論述反方觀點(diǎn)，即此舉會(huì)加重交通負(fù)擔(dān)。結(jié)合假設(shè)論證，具體舉例展開論述。

paragraph 3: 論述自己的觀點(diǎn)，即從住宅，商業(yè)和企業(yè)發(fā)展的角度來列舉此舉的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。

paragraph 4: 總結(jié)自己的觀點(diǎn)，且提出關(guān)于學(xué)校建址的建議。

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In modern cities, people’s way of living and working has dramatically changed. In an attempt to satisfy the demands of growing population and tackle problems emerging from city life, urban planners are deciding to locate shops, educational institutions, workplaces and residential real estates in separated areas. As far as I am concerned, it does function effectively.

Opponents do insist that this practice aggravates the traffic burden. It is understandable that if those facilities are respectively situated in one certain district, how crowed it would be. Imaging that in peak hours, thousands of school buses or private cars carrying students are driven to the same direction; subways crowed with hurried office workers run the same route. Obviously, it is unwise to implement this plan as it increases the possibility of traffic congestion, which has already been a tough issue in most megacities.

However, there are some benefits that cannot be ignored, the most rooted of which is that the citizens ‘general satisfaction of life has been enhanced. To be specific, dwellers are more likely to live in a quieter and greener environment as there is less noise from busy streets but more room for trees and gardens. In addition, being away from skyscrapers or high-rises that remain us of a fast-paced life, homes will be more of a place for leisure and happiness. What’s more, the centralized commercial district provides convenience to consumers since there is no need for them to go shopping for different items around the city. Instead, they could purchase their fancy shoes or pick up the most charming dress in a place. Last but not the least, resource sharing and win-win mode can be easier to achieve between enterprises. A case in the point is that when a manager of Development Department in a training center intends to develop online courses, his potential cooperative partners may work in the IT company upstairs.

In conclusion, I believe that this is the future metropolis’ development tendency due to the fact that it facilitates inhabitants’ daily life and new pattern of business. Certainly, schools are better not to be constructed far away from housing estate; otherwise, students would suffer a lot on the way to schools.

原創(chuàng)來自小站范鈺紅老師

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