Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

7月28雅思寫作話題分析

屬于犯罪類話題;具體涉及到預防青少年犯罪的層面。考生在答題時需要注意題干中限定詞 “the best”。若采取不同意的態度，則可以先承認其合理之處，但是有其他合適的人選。在寫作過程中，犯罪類詞匯表達也可能是考生存在的一個難點，因此平時務必注重該類話題詞匯的積累。

P1：改寫背景信息且表明自己的態度。

P2：論述成為好公民的罪犯可以告知學生犯罪的危害但他們不是最佳人選。

P3：論述其他可以教育學生犯罪的危害的人選。

P4：總結并表明自己的觀點

雅思寫作范文：

Those rehabilitated ex-convicts are the best persons who could educate students on the severe consequence of perpetrating a crime, as some people argue. As far as I am concerned, I disagree with this viewpoint.

Admittedly, the former prisoners’ painful experience does serve the purpose well. The depression of being sentenced and punished as well as the torment of being isolated from society act as a deterrent to prevent teenagers from engaging in criminal wrongdoing, whereas those people are not the most suitable ones considering the fact that their stories are merely relevant to their personal sufferings rather than a comprehensive law education.

In this scenario, officials of law enforcement department and judge of the court are supposed to assist students in building up the awareness of abiding by the laws. Lawyers, for instance, are far more knowledgeable about the line between legal and illegal, imparting the common law concept to juveniles so as to stop them breaking laws due to ignorance. As for the judges, who are equipped with expertise in trial and arbitration, can emphasize the coercive power of law and the principle of equality under the law in order to eliminate adolescents’ idea of getting off. Therefore, it is indispensable to have both of them for school legal education.

In conclusion, even if the stories told by ex-prisoners have a deterrent impact on children who are curious about committing offences, I object to inviting them to educate students in school. From my perspective, experts dealing with law cases and sentences play a more significant role in helping children realize the danger of crimes.

雅思寫作犯罪類詞匯：

rehabilitated恢復的;復原的  convict 囚犯 perpetrate a crime犯罪  be sentenced 被判決

torment折磨(精神) act as a deterrent 作為一個威懾物  criminal wrongdoing犯罪行為

in this scenario 在這種情況下 law enforcement department執法部門 abide by遵守

the line between legal and illegal合法與非法的界限 ignorance無知 expertise in專長于

trial審判 arbitration仲裁 the coercive power of law法律的強制性

the principle of equality under the law法律的公平性 get off逃脫(刑罰)

have a deterrent impact on對。。。有威懾作用  …, as some people argue 非限定定語從句

..., imparting …現在分詞作結果狀語 considering the fact that,…原因狀語從句引導詞

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