2018年3月15日雅思寫(xiě)作大作文參考范文(附講解)
2018年3月15日?qǐng)龅难潘伎荚囈呀?jīng)結(jié)束,為大家?guī)?lái)最新雅思寫(xiě)作真題及參考范文。本場(chǎng)雅思寫(xiě)作題目是:Many countries are spending a huge amount of money on supporting their competitors to take part in some worldwide sports competitions. Others argue that it would be better if these countries can spend the money on children to take part in sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2012年9月1日考試真題,社會(huì)類話題)
整篇文章采取的是2/8開(kāi)的結(jié)構(gòu),這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)在傾向型文章中是得分最高但卻是最難把握的。要先寫(xiě)出兩個(gè)贊成的觀點(diǎn),然后寫(xiě)讓步的理由,同時(shí)再轉(zhuǎn)折去反駁這個(gè)理由,這對(duì)大家比較有挑戰(zhàn)性。
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Traditionally, some people hold the belief that spending money on training elite competitors(培訓(xùn)精英選手) to shine on the international stage(在國(guó)際舞臺(tái)功成名就) is worthwhile. Nowadays, a growing number of people tend to believe that a country should invest more in youngsters' physical exercises, and therefore stimulate their interest for taking part in sports from an early age.
支持的理由:如果考慮到大眾,尤其是青少年運(yùn)動(dòng)設(shè)施的貧乏,支持頂級(jí)運(yùn)動(dòng)員的設(shè)施有點(diǎn)本末倒置(put the cart before the horse),因?yàn)楹⒆邮菄?guó)際的未來(lái),只有他們的身體有保障,國(guó)家的未來(lái)才更有希望。
Some people believe that it is not worthwhile to finance the sports competitors merely for the purpose of achieving success in the arena if we take the poor situation of mass sports into consideration(考慮到). Lack of physical exercise has become a huge problem among citizens, particularly teenagers, as the construction and maintenance(建設(shè)和維護(hù)) of sports facilities is underfunded(資金不足). Actually, children's sports activities are more beneficial for the future development of a nation as sports can ensure children maintain energetic and keep good physical condition in the future study so that they deserve more financial support from the government as well as sponsors (贊助商)of sports events.
讓步段說(shuō)支持運(yùn)動(dòng)員也有好處,主要是通過(guò)在國(guó)際上展現(xiàn)國(guó)家的體育實(shí)力,可以提高國(guó)家的國(guó)際形象和聲望(improve the image and prestige internationally),但是畢竟這些設(shè)施比較專業(yè)和高級(jí),只有少數(shù)運(yùn)動(dòng)員才能使用,普通大眾很難從中受益。
Admittedly, global sports contests not only provide audience with a perfect opportunity to enjoy the excellent performances of athletes but also provide host countries(主辦國(guó)) a perfect chance to present the sporting success in front of global political and business leaders who are highly likely to watch live broadcast via satellite relays(衛(wèi)星轉(zhuǎn)播). However, squandering(揮霍) money in supporting competitors to take part in worldwide sports competitions seems to bring little actual effect to general public. It is largely because there are only a few top athletes having the chance to win the medals but their routine training demands high-standard facilities and athletic ground which can hardly be used by ordinary people.
最后扣題,國(guó)家在關(guān)注運(yùn)動(dòng)員設(shè)施的同時(shí),更應(yīng)該投資在大眾運(yùn)動(dòng)設(shè)施上。
In conclusion, when countries raise fund for sports or celebrate the victory of their athletes, they should not neglect the fact that many children are in great need of(急需) sports facilities.
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