2004年考研英語真題大作文模板：渴望
近年來英語作文評分標準越來越“去模板化”，所謂模板則是指一些常見的句型羅列。但是，作文真的就不需要模板了嗎?當然不是，你所需做的是，參考優(yōu)秀模板，結合自己平日總結的單詞詞匯，整理出屬于你自己的模板。下面以一位英語大神的作文為例。
當時整理的英語作文(水平肯定不是非常高，但希望對大家有所幫助。文中可能會有一些小錯誤，大家看的時候多留心。還是建議大家自己整理，我當時整理的這些僅供參考)：
2004年考研英語真題大作文模板：渴望
The picture above presents to us a scene that a boy, who is sweating heavily, is dashing toward the finishing line. It seems that he will be the winner of the race, yet the caption below reminds us that he must go on striving because the finishing line is a starting line.
The connotation implicit in the picture proposes to tell us that facing the success, we should not abandon ourselves in the joy and excitement, which will be history soon, but to focus on the future for another success. In other words, persistent thirst for more successes is indispensable for us to obtain a series of achievements. On the one hand, the thirst for more successes means a powerful motive force, which could drive us to seek something valuable in our lives. On the other hand, the lack of enough impetus is the cradle of resignation, and it’s difficult to see how a person, who lacks enough impetus, could obtain what he or she wishes in such a fiercely competitive society. Accordingly, what I have stated above could sufficiently testify that the persistent thirst for more successes plays a key role in one’s cause.
To exemplify such a relatively abstract principle, let’s take George Best, a famous football player of England, as an example. Best was the best player in 1960s, but the star suddenly fell when he became immersed in his past achievement and prestige and addicted to alcohol. So, we can conclude that persistent thirst is the passport to a perpetual success.
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