【寫作范文】托福綜合寫作滿分作文——網絡故事書
托福綜合寫作滿分作文：
網絡故事書(web-storybook service)
reading
網絡故事書的好處
1.可以教小朋友讀書
2.經濟實惠，家長不需要為孩子買書了
3.可以代替父母陪伴孩子，為家長節省時間
lecture
反駁
1.使用時不能和小朋友互動(ask question and get feedback)
2.網絡上的故事都是過時的，要想讀新故事還是要買書(不足)
3.父母與孩子一起讀書可以增進感情
托福綜合寫作滿分作文例文：
The speaker rebuts the reading's argument by pointing out
the inadequacy of the web-storybook services' interaction with children, the incompleteness of the data pool, and by undermining the assumption that saving parents' reading time is a benefit.
The speaker begins by stating that merely pronouncing the words and story for the children will not provide adequate learning experiences. Despite the time saved and pronunciation utilities laid out in the reading, the web services can only respond with "correct" or "not correct". The lack of feedback to children's questions will not create an effective learning process.
Then the speaker goes on to argue that the current web-storybook services have a very limited collection of books, thus not being able to save parents the cost of new books as the reading states, because the parents still have to buy many books that the web services do not provide.
Lastly, the speaker challenges the validity of the assumption of saving parents' time to read stories to children. The reading argues that saving the time is a benefit for the parents, but the speaker maintains that the whole point of reading stories is far beyond reading stories alone. In contrast, it is an essential way of communicating and building relationship between parents and children.
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