【寫作范文】托福綜合寫作滿分作文——藥品廣告
托福綜合寫作滿分作文：
藥品廣告(drug advertisement)
提出命題：藥品廣告所提供的信息都是客觀全面的，且病人對藥物了解得越多越好
1.病人可以更多了解處方藥的相關信息(information)
2.醫生開藥時，病人可以與廣告上進行比較，有利于選藥
3.通過廣告，病人可以了解到新藥的發展，提醒醫生
挑戰命題：病人不需要對藥物了解太多，因為有時候了解得太多會對非專業的病人產生困擾，而且廣告所提供的信息也不完整全面
1.廣告通常只有宣傳好處，對副作用(side effects)一筆帶過，病人很難判斷
2.病人對藥物的準確用法用量不了解，可能會用錯
3.廣告只宣傳新藥，對舊藥沒有宣傳，但是針對不同的病情，也許舊藥更為合適
托福綜合寫作滿分作文范例：
The speaker raises serious counterarguments against the reading paragraphs by providing drastically different evidences regarding
the effects of the advertisement, the impact of self-selecting medication, and the impact of trends in the pharmaceutical industry.
Firstly, knowing more information from the ads will not necessarily help the patients make better-informed decisions, as the reading argues. On the contrary, patients, without professional training and knowledge, will be more susceptible to misunderstanding information. For example, they would focus only on the positive sides of a certain medicine while ignoring the serious side effects.
In addition, if the patients bear the responsibility of prescribing their own medication, they assume more responsibility to their own health. This makes doctors less liable for potential risks and undesirable consequences.
Lastly, as for the new trends' benefits to the patients, the speaker does not challenge the reading directly. Instead, he argues that the new medicine, which will count for most of the ads may not necessarily be the best medicine, even though the patients can inform their doctors about the new products.
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