如何讓托福寫(xiě)作據(jù)真實(shí)性？學(xué)會(huì)用好數(shù)據(jù)例證
在托福寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，我們的學(xué)生難免也會(huì)產(chǎn)生一些疑慮，在很多情況下一些例證都是自己編寫(xiě)的，不是很真實(shí)，這在寫(xiě)作中真的沒(méi)有關(guān)系么?那么，在托福寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，對(duì)于一些數(shù)據(jù)例證我們應(yīng)該注意到哪些問(wèn)題呢?下面我們就為大家詳細(xì)的介紹一下吧。
托福寫(xiě)作經(jīng)驗(yàn)介紹：首先我們要有模板，
模板一：
A 年份 survey/ report, conducted by 組織/機(jī)構(gòu)/xxx university, (after polling xxx 人群 aged x and x) proved that xx% a, xx% b, xx% c.
模板二：
According to 年份 surveys, conducted by 組織/機(jī)構(gòu)， shows that …
其次，我們要積累編寫(xiě)數(shù)據(jù)例證時(shí)常用的機(jī)構(gòu)/組織的名稱(chēng)：
環(huán)保局Environmental protection agency
衛(wèi)生廳 department of public health
教育部Ministry of Education
人力資源部Human resource Department
交通局 Traffic department
數(shù)據(jù)類(lèi)題目適用于哪類(lèi)題目?最適用的題型是今昔對(duì)比類(lèi)題目， 如下：
Twenty years from now on, people will have more leisure time than they do now.
Secondly, the working time of people has become much shorter, thus resulting in people's preference for more leisure time. According to 1995 and 2005 surveys conducted by Human Resources Department, people worked 8 hours every day in 2005 while people in 1995 worked almost 9 hours each day. The shortened work time is caused by the wide use fo machines.
分析：
托福作文題目大意： 20年后，人們會(huì)有更多休閑時(shí)間。
人們休閑時(shí)間越來(lái)越多可以通過(guò)調(diào)查人們?cè)?995和2005工作時(shí)長(zhǎng)的減少反映出來(lái)。
It was easier to identify what jobs or careers were secure and successful in the past than it is now.
Additionally, a questionnaire about choosing an ideal job conducted by Career Service Center in China has surveyed two groups of people with the first at the age of 50 and above and the second aged from 20 to 30. 58.4%. According to the above survey, 32.5% of the first group respectively choose the option of civil servants and teachers. On the contrary, 72.4% of the second group circled the third option of other occupations such as singers, freelance writers and so on. The difference in the two groups of figures lies in the transition of people's attitude of choosing a job .
題目大意： 現(xiàn)在更難以去判斷一項(xiàng)工作是否成功。
通過(guò)一項(xiàng)問(wèn)卷調(diào)查來(lái)說(shuō)明現(xiàn)在人們打破了以前鐵飯碗的觀念，開(kāi)始從事其他類(lèi)別的工作，從而證明人們對(duì)于成功工作的定義變得多樣化。
Nowadays it is easier to get educated than in the past.
A 2012-report conducted by Beijing Human Resources Department: the female percentage in the occupations such as professors, doctors, layers. Engineers grew by 80.3% compared to the days 50 years ago.
通過(guò)古今對(duì)比體面工作中女性比例的上升，來(lái)證明女性接受教育比以前要容易了。
總之，我們要想熟練的運(yùn)用數(shù)據(jù)類(lèi)論據(jù)，首先，記住固定的表達(dá)方式，其次，要總結(jié)常用的機(jī)構(gòu)名稱(chēng)，最后，要知道數(shù)據(jù)類(lèi)論據(jù)適合古今對(duì)比類(lèi)文章。
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