童年憶事我童年的甜美回憶-A Pleasant Memory of My Chi.
童年憶事我童年的甜美回憶-A Pleasant Memory of My Childhood
我童年的甜美回憶
【內容提示】
童年是美好的，人人都會有難忘的回憶。請按下面的要點記述發生在童年的一件事：
①我18歲了，但是童年的樂趣像甜蜜的夢一樣令人難忘。②一天，我們全家去爬山。父親讓我和姐姐來一場比賽。誰先爬到山頂就會得到一件玩具。③開始我領先，幾分鐘之后姐姐到了我的前面；我不甘落后，最終第一個到達山頂。④我們在山頂欣賞美景，吃野餐。之后，我們快活地下山了。我最高興，因為我得到了一件玩具。
【作文示范】
A Pleasant Memory of My Childhood
I am eighteen years old now, but the recollection① of the fun and amusement② is like a sweet dream.One Sunday, our family went to climb the beautiful Shushan Hill .My father told my elder sister and me that the first one to get to the top would be given a toy. We jumped with joy. We started to run up. At first I took the lead. A few minutes later I was breathless and my sister was ahead of me. The soft masses of the waving grass, and the drowsy③, balmy④ air all sent their warm invitation for me to rest. But I followed my thirst for the toy and continued climbing. At last I reached the top first.
There we enjoyed the fascinating view and had a picnic. At about two o＇clock we danced our way down the hill with joy in our hearts, and I felt happier than the others because I got a toytrain .
【詞語解釋】①recollection [rek ＇lekM n] n．回憶；追憶②amusement[ ＇mju:zm nt] n．樂趣；娛樂活動③drowsy[＇drauzi] a．昏昏欲睡的；催人入睡的④balmy[＇ba:mi] a．有香氣的；芬芳的
【寫法指要】
1）本文記敘了作者兒時的一件小事。事情雖小，卻令作者回味無窮，每每憶起總有一種甜美的（pleasant）感受，好像做著香甜的夢（sweet dream）。這樣敘述會給讀者留下深刻的印象。由此看來，寫記敘文不要面面俱到，要從眾多素材中擷取一件最有代表性的事例敘述即可。2）作者在文中使用了三種修辭格：（1）擬人（personification）：“The soft masses of waving grass，and the drowsy，balmy air all sent their invitation for me to rest．”（那起伏的嫩軟青草，那催人入睡的芬芳的氣息都在熱烈邀請我停下來休息。）；（2）明喻（simile）：“like a sweet dream”（像做著香甜的夢）；（3）隱喻（metaphor）：“followed my thirst for the toy”（渴望得到那件玩具）。這樣，全文讀來饒有風趣。
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