范文:honesty
「要求」
請以下面三句話分別作為三段段首的主題句，寫一篇題為“誠實”的文章。
It is usually better to be honest than dishonest.
One of the worst things about lying is that it results in a guilty conscience.
Honesty makes you happy and gain a good reputation.
「范文」
honesty
We often praise somebody because of his diligence and honesty. So all the people think that honesty is a virtue and that it is the best policy.
It is usually better to be honest than dishonest. People tend to believe an honest man， no matter what he does and what he says. On the contrary， dishonest people are not trustworthy. For this reason， honest people are always more successful than the dishonest. So it is better to be honest because it can help you succeed.
One of the worst things about lying is that it results in a guilty conscience. If a person tells lies， his face will turn red and his heart will beat faster. He will always live in fright.
Honesty makes you happy and gains a good reputation. All people consider what you've said true and trust you just because you are an honest man. Therefore， you can say what you like and do what you like without fear. You will feel very happy. Likewise， just because of your honesty， people respect you and love you. Gradually， you will gain a good reputation. To be honest will ensure you a happy life.
「評語」
該文內容切題，詳略安排得當，重點放在誠實的益處，即第二段和第四段上。這兩段的段末均有一句總結句與段首的主題句相呼應，使段落結構完整，同時強化了主題。文章語言略顯單調，但比較順暢，表達也較清楚。
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