范文:Failure
「要求」
題目：Failure（失敗）是一個人經(jīng)常遇到的。失敗不是好事，因為它使人的努力（efforts）付之東流。但是，失敗也是好事，它可以教育我們使我們學(xué)到更多的東西。試寫一短文就此談?wù)勀銓κ〉目捶ā?/p>
「范文」
Failure
Nearly everybody regards failure as a bad thing. The efforts we have made seem to be of no use and we feel very disappointed. Some people even lose the courage to start again or lose interest in life when the failure is a very great one.
But failure can also benefit us. It can teach us a good lesson and make us experienced. Also， we can realize our own shortcomings and get a better knowledge of ourselves. So when we start again， we can succeed more easily.
Therefore， failure not only disappoints us but also benefits us. When we fail， we should make full use of our failure and learn from our experience. Then， we may succeed in the future.
Life is made up of ambiguous victories and nebulous defeats――claim them all as victories！
「評語」
本文最大的優(yōu)點是正反對照，條理清楚。高考作文時間很短，所以謀篇布局顯得十分重要。本文脈絡(luò)清楚，淺顯易懂，應(yīng)該說在考場中是容易取勝的。此外，本篇行文簡練，顯得干凈利落。
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