【托福寫作提分】托福寫作備考時4大常見錯誤需注意
在備考托福時候，學生們寫的作文里或多或少都會有一些錯誤。而往往在大家自己檢查的時候，都很難注意到這些細小的問題。現在，我們就為大家羅列出這些在托福寫作中，最常見的問題，希望能為大家的托福寫作備考帶來幫助。
1、用詞不當
In the show，if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly，they will get five hundreds thousand US dollars as a prize。
problems應改為questions
The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion，it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people，teachers are a kind of vocation。
該句的表達過于中式化。
2、拼寫錯誤
這里的拼寫錯誤不是指在考試時候的誤打，而是本身對詞匯拼寫記憶的錯誤。
In conclusion，issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one，requiring subjective judgement，consequently，there are no easy or certain answers。
judgement應改為judgment
3、亂用大詞
First of all，children can earn money from their jobs，although there isn’t too much，but they will keep their salary gingerliness。
這里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。該句子還有以下問題：
1)該作文題目是講學生是否應該做兼職，因此children的出現就顯得很莫名其妙;
2)although和but是不能連用的;
3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;
4、表達中式
The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion，it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people，teachers are a kind of vocation。
該句的表達過于中式化。
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