對于托福備考來說，想要提升自己的成績充分的備考時(shí)間和方法是比不可少的。而對于中國考生而言，在托福寫作中，所缺少的并是詞匯量和句型掌握，而更多的是邏輯思維的運(yùn)用和展開。那么，相信在以下一些滿分范例的閱讀中就會(huì)為大家?guī)聿簧俚膫淇检`感。

托福IBT高分作文：

Choosing a job: high-paying with long working hours, or low-paying withshort working hours?

Which would you choose: a high-paying job with long hours that would give you little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends?Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.

托福IBT高分作文分析：

在不同的階段有不同的選擇。比如：

年輕的時(shí)候 vs 成家之后

剛剛開始工作 vs 積蓄頗豐

托福IBT高分作文范文：選擇一份怎樣的工作

I am optimistic that through my studies and continued hard work I will be able to find a job that will provide　my future family and me with financial security. We should be able to afford the necessities of life, such as a modest　home, enough food to nourish us and keep us in good health, as well as education for our children.

Hopefully, I will　find myself in the fortunate situation where I can decide between a high-paying job with long hours and a　lower-paying job with shorter hours. I would choose the job with the lower salary and greater personal time without　hesitation, because my family and friends are the most important things in my life.

Time is the greatest investment I can make into the relationships with my wife and my children. A marriage is　not just a decision one makes but a promise that one keeps. In order to do so one has to be there for the other person　and share moments of joy as well as times of difficulty. Nowadays, too many relationships wither away as the　partners are unable to work out their problems or bond through meaningful experiences. Personal careers become too important and family time becomes a rare occurrence.The absence of one parent, due to professional career or divorce, can have a very negative effect on a child's　development. The child might question his value to father or mother (depending on which one is continually　absent) and develop low self-esteem. Without the presence of either or, worse, both parents, the child will be morelikely to make bad decisions as he is lacking proper guidance. And there is one point should also be mentioned, i.e.neither expensive toys nor fancy clothes can compensate for this.

Lastly, I can derive more pleasure from spending time with my friends than I ever could from driving a sports　car or taking luxury vacations. The inner peace and balance that I enjoy from their company are nvaluable to me.Also, a million dollars in the bank would be worth nothing if I didn't have the time to enjoy these riches with my　friends.

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