范文:Train Travel or Air Travel?
「要求」
根據提示，用英文寫一篇100―120字左右的短文，說明乘飛機或火車旅行的利弊。如：乘飛機省時舒適，乘火車擁擠，不便于休息，但乘火車便宜，可觀光等等。標題及文章的第一句已給出，不計入總字數之內。
Train Travel or Air Travel？
Air travel has two advantages（益處）over train travel…
「范文」
Train Travel or Air Travel？
Air travel has two advantages（益處）over train travel. First， traveling by plane can save a lot of time. For example， traveling by plane can save a lot of time. For example， you can fly from Beijing to Zhuhai in two hours， but if you go by train， you have to spend more than two days. Secondly， air travel is more comfortable. The plane flies so smoothly that you can rest well during the trip， while the train is sometimes crowded.
Passengers have to sit for a long time ，which makes people tired. But train travel also has its own advantages. For example， traveling by train can save over nine hundred yuan than by plane from Beijing to Zhuhai. And you can enjoy the views outside the windows of the train. So different people like different ways of traveling.
「評語」
本文的結構順序用“First”、“Secondly”等標志性詞語顯示出來，因而使層次顯得極為清晰。
注意控制字數，尤其本文有特殊要求。
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