范文:Problems of wasting
「要求」
人類每時每刻都在浪費著各種各樣的資源,不僅包括自然資源,還包括時間資源。請你以下面三句話分別作為段首主題句,寫一篇短文談談浪費問題。
Mankind is wasting things everywhere and every day.
The worst example of man's waste is the waste of time.
It is time to call for an end to waste.
「范文」
Mankind is wasting things everywhere and every day. Wherever we turn, we can see that paper, bottles and cans are thrown away; food is wasted just because of its poor taste; clothes are discarded simply due to their old fashion. Not only things and money are wasted, but natural resources are abused as well. Trees are cut down merely for fuel; wildlife is killed simply for food; oil, coal and minerals are exploited in a bad way.
The worst example of man's waste is the waste of time. Many people tend to spend their time on worthless things, such as wandering about in the street, gossiping in the office, or sleeping too much during the day. As we know, time is so precious to us that it passes by and never returns. The waste of time amounts to the waste of life.
It is time to call for an end to waste. On the one hand, we must save natural resources and make full use of them; otherwise human beings will be faced with the scarcity of natural resources and suffer from the pollution caused by wastes. On the other hand, we must treasure our time. Only with our time devoted to study and work for the people will we never regret the life we have had.
「評語」
該文主題突出,論述充分而有層次。句子之間銜接自然,邏輯性強。文中詞語搭配講究,符合英語表態習慣。
詞語搭配是難點也是重點,只要熟練運用,才能真正掌握。
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