托福獨立寫作“套路”破解:讓步轉折
獨立寫作有點麻煩,因為我覺得這個部分拿good不難,但是你要拿滿分的good就難了,獨立寫作畢竟還是要考一點水平的,所以這部分滿分的good我個人認為沒有綜合部分容易,但是如果你只想拿個good還是很easy的。其實到后面我基本已經形成了一個寫作思路,這個思路就是讓步轉折。
結構就是這樣的:
第一段+讓步段+兩個轉折段+結尾,基本就是A比B好,B有一個好處,可是A有兩個好處,A的好處點更多,或是A的好處更重大,所以A好,然后總結一下。
一般都希望大家事先準備好自己的一套模板,這里的模板我只局限在開頭和結尾,就好比我到后面基本每次都是同樣的開頭和結尾,考試的時候自己稍微改動幾個詞就好了,獨立寫作部分一開始,我就開始寫,差不多3分鐘時間就把開頭和結尾全敲完了,然后我就有更多的時間寫我的中間段了。宗旨就是最好自己寫,自己改,可以多看看范文之類的,自己總結一套,之后你就按那個寫,背熟它,考試的時候3分鐘瀟瀟灑灑噼里啪啦就將近100個詞敲上去了,想想都爽。
這是我用的開頭段,因為我后面都用讓步轉折,所以就用了這個開頭。
In contemporary society, much ink has been spilled about......(題目改寫),and some claim that... Such assertion, however, is torn to pieces by others. As far as I am concerned, the statement that...(題目改寫)is arbitrary and one-sided because it fails to take all the related circumstances into consideration. We should analyze this statement comprehensively before we draw the eventual conclusion.結尾段In brief, based on the previous discussion, the issue...(改寫題目)is complex and needs a case by case analysis. We are not supposed to disregard those situations where the statement is unjustifiable. As a result, I cannot totally agree with this statement.
之后就是中間段落怎么寫了,這里我推薦大家多看看考題,將其分分類,想一想一般都有什么理由可以寫,像壓力、經濟等理由是很適用的,你平時多練練考試的時候直接套上去就行了。這里給大家看幾個例子:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to help their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
題型:隱藏絕對詞類
話題:社會類
分析:隱藏絕對詞類的題目暗含的意思是一類人都應該做某事兒。
我們既可以完全同意這個事兒的2-3個好處,也可以完全不同意找到其2-3個比較好展開而且不重復的壞處,畢竟一個事兒很難適合所有人,只要我們找到一個反例,實際上就可以很好地反駁這個題目。
思路一:一邊倒同意
1.由于很多大城市的生活成本高到了前所未有程度,現在的年輕人普遍面臨著雙重壓力,因此沒有時間和精力來幫忙社區。
First and foremost, with the living costs in most of megalopolises hitting all time high, a large proportion of young urban residents today are exposed to scissor-style pressure, as a result of which rare will be the spare time that is available for making contributions to improving the community. For relevant examples we only need to turn to the experience of my elder brother, a newly graduated college student, majoring in software engineering, working in a leading software company as a development engineer...
2.隨著社交網絡的出現以及生活節奏的加快,現在的年輕人跟鄰居熟識的機會越來越少,自然也就不愿意去參與社區的改善。
On the top of that, there is no point for the young people working in metropolises to help their neighbors if the chance of getting acquainted with them seems quit slim, thanks mainly to the advent of social network applications and also to the increasingly rapid pace of modern life. My elder brother's experience can be cited here again to shed the light on this point.Money is the most important aspect in a job.Material reward is not the only factor to consider while choosing a job, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those seasoned employees, thanks to the ever-increasing living cost in the overwhelming majority of metropolises, to the scissor-style pressure they are exposed to from supporting their aging parents as well as raising children, and above all, to their strong desire of receiving salaries in a reasonable proportion to their years of strenuous work.Helping the community| Voluntary work is not the only factor to consider in their spare time, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those young people from affluent families, thanks mainly to the strong desire to escape the ennui of home and to find identity, and also to the sense of self-fulfillment gained in such kind of activities.
思路二:具體情況具體分析
對于條件比較差的年輕人來說,他們很難找到足夠的時間來幫助改善社區因為他們沒有選擇只能不遺余力的賺更多的錢,甚至以犧牲自己的身體健康為代價。
With regard to young people in poor and backward areas, hardly could they have enough time to make contributions to the improvement of their communities on account of the fact that they have no options but to pull out all their stops to earn more money even at the cost their health. There are myriads of examples in our lives, one of which is my elder brother, a high school graduate, working as a waiter in a restaurant in Beijing.
然而,對于那些來自經濟比較發達地區的年輕人來說,很容易想象他們中絕大部分人愿意在社區改善中扮演非常積極的角色。首先,他們更強烈的意識到和諧社區的必要性;其次,不斷提高的生活水平使得他們不必成為最基礎的需求擔心,主要問題或許集中在通過改善社區獲得新的成就感。
However, when it comes to the youth in economically advanced/vibrant areas, it takes little imagination to think that a majority of them are willing to play an active role in bettering their neighborhoods.Granted, helping the community| Voluntary work is not the only factor to consider in their spare time, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those young people from affluent families, thanks mainly to the strong desire to escape the ennui of home and to find identity, and also to the sense of self-fulfillment gained in such kind of activities. It is much easier for the parents to raise children now than fifty years ago.
To achieve successful development of a country, a government should focus its budgets more on young children education than on higher education?
題型:二元素對比類
話題:教育類
分析:從涉及到主題出發,比如老師、學生、家長、國家的角度進行討論
Today people cannot buy products based on information in their advertisements because advertisements are less honest than before.
題型: 今昔對比類
話題: 商業類
思路: 一邊倒,但是從公司和個人兩個角度進行分析
First of all, there is no denying that fewer and fewer companies would like to allure their customers through deceptive ads since the benefits of such kind of market activities pales into insignificance when set against their huge negative impact.Furthermore, at the individual level, with the advent of popularity of the internet, especially the introduction of all kinds of applications, an increasing number of consumers have come to the rude awakening that most of ads are at best informative and at worst misleading.
這里列出的都是body part最開頭的幾句,這里很多給出的理由和解題思路都給你列出來了,試著按他提供的這種自我分析一下。這里面其實有些句型和短語詞組是考場上很高頻地會用到的,你不妨就直接拿來背,不斷地套這些句型去寫不同主題的句子。因為我現在覺得水平不是很高的人如何在托福寫作拿高分?不是真的考場上寫出來的,是靠考場下準備出來的,是背出來的。像一些你平時覺得考試會經常用到的短語何不平時多總結多練習呢,考場上用到就直接蹦出來了,還會糾結怎么寫比較好嗎?就好比“許多”、“因為”這種的,你肯定會用,那就平日多總結。
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